List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免使用口头语“umm”，并且注意语句的连贯性和准确性。例如，“pick up some thing”应为“pick up something”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达“catches my eye”。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse around the store and pick up things that catch my eye spontaneously. I enjoy discovering new brands and snacks this way.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“thousands of, you know, challenging tasks”显得不自然，且“southern deadline”可能是错误表达，应为“short deadline”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免口语化表达。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially at the end of the semester when I have many challenging tasks to complete before a tight deadline. However, I sometimes struggle to finish all the tasks I planned.

提案: 回答较好，但“more spontaneous way”应改为“a more spontaneous way”，并且可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。建议丰富细节，说明为什么不喜欢被限制。

例: I guess it's just a personal preference. Some people prefer a more spontaneous way of doing things because they don't like to feel restricted or limited by a list they made beforehand.

提案: 回答中有重复词语“on the on the”，应注意语句的准确性和简洁性。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明为什么纸质列表更正式。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it feels more formal. Marking items off the paper list gives me a sense of reward and helps me take my tasks more seriously.

× I prefer to browse around the store and, umm, pick up some thing that catches my eye.

✓ I prefer to browse around the store and, umm, pick up some things that catch my eye.

这里的'some thing'应为复数形式'some things'，因为后面动词用的是复数形式'catch'，表示多个物品。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

× This catches my eye.

✓ These catch my eye.

前文提到的是多个物品，因此指示代词应使用复数形式'These'，动词也应用复数形式'catch'，保持主谓一致。

× I have thousands of, you know, challenging tasks to cram for in the southern deadline to meet.

✓ I have thousands of, you know, challenging tasks to cram for before the deadline to meet.

原句中'southern deadline'用词不当，应为'before the deadline'表示在截止日期之前完成任务。这里涉及介词使用错误，已在下条修正。

× I have thousands of, you know, challenging tasks to cram for in the southern deadline to meet.

✓ I have thousands of, you know, challenging tasks to cram for before the deadline to meet.

介词'in the southern deadline'用法错误，正确表达应为'before the deadline'，表示在截止日期之前完成任务。

× But I don't always manage to finish all the missions that I scheduled for myself because it's hard for me to.

✓ But I don't always manage to finish all the missions that I scheduled for myself because it's hard for me.

句子末尾'to'多余，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉。

× Some people just prefer more spontaneous way of doing things or completing a mission so they wouldn't like to be restricted or limited by a list that they had made beforehand.

✓ Some people just prefer a more spontaneous way of doing things or completing a mission, so they wouldn't like to be restricted or limited by a list that they had made beforehand.

'more spontaneous way'前缺少冠词'a'，表示单数可数名词前需要冠词。

× Some people just prefer more spontaneous way of doing things or completing a mission so they wouldn't like to be restricted or limited by a list that they had made beforehand.

✓ Some people just prefer a more spontaneous way of doing things or completing a mission, so they wouldn't like to be restricted or limited by a list that they had made beforehand.

复合句中两个分句之间应有逗号分隔，连接词'so'前应加逗号以符合英语书写规范。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it gives me a more formal feeling and with marking them on the on the list on the paper it can give me a sense of reward and it can make me take it more seriously.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it gives me a more formal feeling, and marking them on the list on paper can give me a sense of reward and make me take it more seriously.

原句中'with marking them on the on the list on the paper'结构混乱，介词'with'多余且重复使用'on the'，应简化为'marking them on the list on paper'，使句子更通顺。