List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating that you make a list to remember what to buy, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember exactly what I need to buy, because sometimes I tend to forget items otherwise.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly and clearly, explaining why you make a list for work and how it helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I make a list at the start of my work to organise my tasks. This helps me work more efficiently and plan ahead.

提案: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion more clearly and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words to improve flow.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to work more freely without following a fixed plan.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to complete your sentences and clearly state your preference. Explain why you prefer one method over the other using specific reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and allows me to easily edit items. Paper lists can be lost or unclear sometimes.

× Yes I do when having at least when I'm shopping I can familiar myself with what exactly stuff I'm going to have and also I'm going to buy because sometime I will forget about what I'm going to buy so having a list can convenient me a lot.

✓ Yes, I do. When I am shopping, I can familiarise myself with exactly what stuff I am going to have and buy because sometimes I forget what I am going to buy, so having a list can be very convenient for me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'when having' instead of 'when I am' and 'can familiar myself' instead of 'can familiarise myself'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', and 'can convenient me' is incorrect; it should be 'can be convenient for me'. The corrections improve verb forms and preposition usage to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes I do. I will make a list in the beginning of my work. It is because I like to have a further outline for my work procedures in order to allow me to have a better future when I am working.

✓ Yes, I do. I will make a list at the beginning of my work. It is because I like to have a clear outline of my work procedures to help me have a better future when I am working.

The phrase 'in the beginning of my work' should be 'at the beginning of my work' to correctly express the time reference. Also, 'a further outline' is awkward; 'a clear outline' is more natural. 'In order to allow me to have a better future' is rephrased to 'to help me have a better future' for clarity and correctness.

× Well, from my point of view, I reckon that some people may think making a list is a burden for doing themselves for example, like some people do not like to have some restriction when they are working. So I think it is the reason why.

✓ Well, from my point of view, I reckon that some people may think making a list is a burden for themselves. For example, some people do not like to have restrictions when they are working. So I think that is the reason why.

The phrase 'a burden for doing themselves' is incorrect; it should be 'a burden for themselves'. Also, 'some restriction' should be plural 'restrictions' to match the context. The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I prefer making a list on my because nowadays the is the most convenient thing that allows you like to correct something that you may have changed. However, on a paper sometimes you may miss it and also the clearness is not bad.

✓ Well, I prefer making a list on my phone because nowadays it is the most convenient thing that allows you to correct something if you have changed it. However, on paper, sometimes you may lose it, and the clarity is not as good.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'On my' is missing the noun 'phone'. 'The is the most convenient thing' is incorrect; it should be 'it is the most convenient thing'. 'Allows you like to correct' should be 'allows you to correct'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper'. 'You may miss it' is better expressed as 'you may lose it'. 'The clearness is not bad' is awkward; 'the clarity is not as good' is clearer.