List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的时态和表达方式。

例: I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and keeps my mind clear.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，句子冗长且不连贯，建议使用简洁明了的句子，注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, as a student, I make lists for my daily tasks and studies, whether I'm at the library or at home. This helps me stay organized and focused.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and prefer to rely on their memory when shopping.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，注意比较级的正确使用，并使表达更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have it with me, unlike paper lists which I might forget at home.

× I always make a list when I will go when before I go shopping because making a list can easily find out what you want and what you need and you can have a clear mind while you are shopping.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because making a list can help me easily find out what I want and what I need, and I can have a clear mind while I am shopping.

句中“when I will go when before I go shopping”时态混乱，且表达重复。购物前的动作应使用一般现在时或一般将来时，建议用“before I go shopping”。另外，“can easily find out”缺少主语，改为“can help me easily find out”更通顺。

× Oh yes, I still I'm still a student so I always make a list about my daily work or study when I go to library or went to adjust study study at my living room so and it's really helped me do my job clearly.

✓ Oh yes, I'm still a student, so I always make a list about my daily work or study when I go to the library or study in my living room, and it really helps me do my work clearly.

句中“went to adjust study study”表达不清且时态错误，应改为“study in my living room”。“it's really helped”时态不对，应该用一般现在时“it really helps”。此外，“go to library”缺少冠词，应为“go to the library”。

× when I go to library or went to adjust study study at my living room

✓ when I go to the library or study in my living room

“library”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指某个图书馆。

× I think making list how my phone is more better because the phone is more capable and more convenient for us to bring with a paper.

✓ I think making a list on my phone is better because the phone is more capable and more convenient to carry than paper.

“making list”缺少冠词，应为“making a list”。“more better”是双重比较级，应改为“better”。“bring with a paper”表达不当，应改为“carry than paper”。

× Maybe is very You may forget forget it at home, but the phone is always on hand.

✓ Maybe you may forget it at home, but the phone is always on hand.

句中缺少主语“you”，导致句子不完整。重复“forget”应去掉一个。