List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免断句不连贯，同时明确表达观点。

例: Yes, I usually bring a shopping list with me because it helps me stay organized. However, when I go window shopping, I prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy the moment without a strict plan.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子断断续续，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清楚地说明原因和结果。

例: I used to make lists when I studied, but I stopped using the app because it made me focus too much on perfectionism, which distracted me from my actual tasks.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如“Deaths”应为“deadlines”），表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，句子完整，逻辑连贯。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by rules. If they don't follow their own deadlines, they might experience a lot of anxiety.

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子有些断裂。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，表达更完整。

例: I prefer using an app on my smartphone because it's more convenient. If I come up with an idea and don't have paper and pen, I can quickly note it down on my phone since I always carry it with me.

× I usually do bring the list with me when I have a window shopping.

✓ I usually do bring the list with me when I go window shopping.

这里的错误是动词短语使用不当。'window shopping' 是动名词短语，前面不需要冠词 'a'，且应使用动词 'go' 来表达去逛街的动作。正确表达是 'go window shopping'。建议记住常用的动词搭配，避免错误使用冠词。

× I usually do bring the list with me when I have a window shopping.

✓ I usually do bring the list with me when I go window shopping.

这里 'have a window shopping' 中 'have' 和 'a' 的使用不正确。'window shopping' 是不可数名词短语，不需要冠词 'a'，且通常用动词 'go' 搭配。应改为 'go window shopping'。

× And the reason is because.

✓ And the reason is that.

句子结构错误，'the reason is because' 是冗余表达，应使用 'the reason is that' 来引导原因。建议避免重复表达。

× I used to make this. When I need to study.

✓ I used to make this when I needed to study.

这里 'make this' 表达不清，且时态不一致。'used to' 表示过去习惯，后面从句应使用过去时 'needed'。建议保持时态一致。

× But now I don't use this app anymore because.

✓ But now I don't use this app anymore because...

句子不完整，缺少原因部分。建议补充完整句子以表达完整意思。

× And that keep me from.

✓ And that keeps me from...

主语 'that' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 's'，即 'keeps'。建议注意主谓一致。

× You know, focusing on my tasks and study.

✓ You know, focusing on my tasks and studies.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，且 'study' 应为复数 'studies' 以匹配 'tasks'。建议补充谓语并保持名词形式一致。

× Deaths are set by themselves.

✓ Deadlines are set by themselves.

单词错误，'Deaths' 应为 'Deadlines'，且 'by themselves' 用法不当，建议改为 'by themselves' 或 'by them'。

× Deaths are set by themselves.

✓ Deadlines are set by themselves.

这里 'themselves' 指代不明确，建议改为 'by themselves' 表示自己设定。

× If I come up with an idea and I don't have a paper and a pen.

✓ If I come up with an idea and I don't have paper and pen.

'paper' 和 'pen' 在此处为不可数名词，通常不加冠词 'a'。建议去掉冠词。