List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz tekrarlayıcı ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha akıcı ve etkili olmak için cümlelerinizi kısaltabilir ve bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Örneğin, neden liste yapmanız gerektiğini açık ve net ifade edin.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

提案: Cevabınız çok kısa ve detay içermiyor. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtladıktan sonra neden liste yapmadığınızı veya bunun işinize etkisini açıklayarak cevabınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind, but sometimes I write important things down to stay organized.

提案: Cevabınız anlaşılması zor ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, neden bazı insanların liste yapmayı sevmediğini net bir şekilde açıklayın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirin.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or prefer to be spontaneous instead of planning everything.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsizlikler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir şekilde tercih nedeninizi açıklayın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirin.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't lose my list like I might with paper.

× Of course you make a list when you go shopping, because when you go shopping maybe you will forget what you want to take, so you must take a list.

✓ Of course you make a list when you go shopping, because when you go shopping you might forget what you want to take, so you must take a list.

The modal verb 'will' is used for definite future events, but here the possibility of forgetting is uncertain, so 'might' is more appropriate to express possibility.

× Uh, I think because she doesn't love to make everything the tiling, umm, she's so comfortable, she takes it easy. Everything say come However sometimes like this.

✓ Uh, I think because some people don't like to make everything in order, umm, they're so comfortable, they take it easy. Sometimes things just happen like this.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used to refer generally to people; 'some people' or 'they' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence structure and word choice were unclear and have been corrected for clarity.

× I prefer make a list in my phone because when you write in paper she maybe will forget it in everywhere but your phone is always with you so it's more comfortable for you.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when you write on paper you might forget it everywhere, but your phone is always with you so it's more comfortable for you.

The correct preposition for devices is 'on' (on my phone), and for surfaces like paper is 'on' (on paper). Also, 'maybe will' is incorrect modal usage; 'might' is better. Pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used and replaced with 'you' for consistency.