List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'I do wait'는 부적절하며, 문장이 중복되고 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 주제문을 사용하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: 답변이 기본 구조를 갖추었으나, 문장이 매끄럽지 않고 마지막 부분이 불완전합니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I can prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important deadlines.

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'test lists chase them'은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I'm not sure, but some people might find making lists stressful because it reminds them of too many tasks or responsibilities.

提案: 답변이 비교적 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 두 문장을 연결하는 접속사를 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy to modify my schedule and tasks, and I can organize everything more efficiently.

× Yes, I do wait.

✓ Yes, I do.

The phrase 'I do wait' is incorrect in this context. The correct response to the question 'Do you make a list when you shop?' is 'Yes, I do.' The verb 'wait' is unnecessary and changes the meaning. The student should simply confirm the action with 'Yes, I do.'

× At the least I don't need to waste my time and don't miss something I need and it's comfortable and helpful for me.

✓ At least, I don't need to waste my time or miss something I need, and it's comfortable and helpful for me.

The phrase 'At the least' should be 'At least'. Also, 'don't miss something I need' should be connected with 'or' instead of 'and' to correctly express alternatives. The sentence is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× It helps me stay organized and saves time and by using it I don't forget any important.

✓ It helps me stay organized, saves time, and by using it, I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'any important' is incomplete; it should be 'anything important' to correctly refer to unspecified important things. Also, commas are added for better sentence flow.

× I'm not sure, but some people think the test lists chase them.

✓ I'm not sure, but some people think the lists chase them.

The word 'test' is likely a typo or incorrect here. The correct word is 'lists'. The sentence should be 'some people think the lists chase them.'

× And I can organize it better.

✓ I can organize it better.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal writing. Removing 'And' improves the sentence's formality and clarity.