List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，有重复和无关内容，建议回答时保持简洁，避免重复，并确保内容相关。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子结构不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because I keep tasks in my mind. However, for very important things, I sometimes save them in a list on my phone.

提案: 表达有些重复且语法不够准确，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词提高流畅度。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously and don't like to be controlled by a list, just like me.

提案: 回答较好，但部分表达不够地道，建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁性。

例: If I have to make a list in advance, I prefer to use my phone because it's more convenient than paper. I don't need to carry a piece of paper, which can be easily lost.

× I will not. I will not have a plane.

✓ I will not.

这里的句子“I will not have a plane”没有上下文支持，且语义不清，可能是多余或错误的表达。建议删除这部分，保持句子简洁。

× I just keep it in my mind and but sometimes I will keep very important things in my phone list.

✓ I just keep it in my mind, but sometimes I will keep very important things in my phone list.

“and but”是错误的连词搭配，应使用“but”表示转折。

× they are not a person who like to control themselves by a list and it just like me.

✓ they are not people who like to control themselves by a list and it's just like me.

“they”指代复数，应使用复数名词“people”，动词“like”需与复数主语一致，且“it just like me”应为“it's just like me”。

× I prefer to do it on my phone because I think it's more convenient than in a paper.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone because I think it's more convenient than on paper.

“paper”前不需要冠词，且比较时应使用“on paper”而非“in a paper”。