List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複，建議可以用更簡潔且自然的句子來表達，避免重複同樣的意思，並且可以加入連接詞讓句子更流暢。

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I buy everything I need.

提案: 回答中有些用詞不太自然，例如"authentic"和"prioritize text"，建議使用更貼切的詞彙，並且注意語法，使表達更清晰。

例: Yes, I often make lists at work because they help me prioritize tasks and remember important things. For example, yesterday I wrote down all my tasks and finished them without feeling stressed. It's a simple but effective way to stay productive.

提案: 你的回答內容豐富且有條理，但有些語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議注意動詞單複數和時態一致，並使用更自然的表達。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or stressful. They prefer a flexible approach and decide tasks as they go. Also, if they can't complete their list, it may cause stress, so they avoid making lists altogether. I think it depends on the person.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和不完整的句子，建議使用完整且正確的句子，並避免重複詞彙，使表達更自然流暢。

例: I prefer writing my lists on paper rather than using digital tools. As a traditional person, I find that writing things down helps me stay clear and organized throughout the day.

× Yeah, I do make a list before I'm shopping 'cause that makes me organize, stay organized.

✓ Yeah, I do make a list before I go shopping 'cause that helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'before I'm shopping' is incorrect because 'before' should be followed by the base verb or gerund form indicating the action. 'Go shopping' is the correct expression. Also, 'makes me organize, stay organized' is awkward; 'helps me stay organized' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And basically I usually go for making a list before I'm shopping because that will make that will make sure I'm clear to buy what's I'm going to buy.

✓ And basically I usually make a list before I go shopping because that will make sure I'm clear about what I'm going to buy.

The phrase 'go for making a list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is the correct verb phrase. Also, 'before I'm shopping' should be 'before I go shopping'. The phrase 'make sure I'm clear to buy what's I'm going to buy' is awkward; it should be 'make sure I'm clear about what I'm going to buy'.

× Yes, I often make a list to orders at my work.

✓ Yes, I often make a list of orders at my work.

The phrase 'make a list to orders' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the content of the list. Also, 'orders' is plural and should be preceded by 'of' to show the list's content.

× I find it very authentic because it helps me prioritize text and not forget anything important.

✓ I find it very useful because it helps me prioritize tasks and not forget anything important.

The word 'authentic' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'useful' or 'effective'. Also, 'prioritize text' is incorrect; it should be 'prioritize tasks'.

× For example, yesterday I wrote down all the things I need to do and I managed to finish everything without feeling stressed.

✓ For example, yesterday I wrote down all the things I needed to do and I managed to finish everything without feeling stressed.

Since the action happened in the past ('yesterday'), the verb 'need' should be in the past tense 'needed' to maintain tense consistency.

× I think some people don't enjoy making this because they feel it is time consuming or too stressed.

✓ I think some people don't enjoy making lists because they feel it is time-consuming or too stressful.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; it should be 'making lists' to specify the activity. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' and 'too stressed' is incorrect; it should be 'too stressful' to describe the feeling.

× Also, some people find that writing a list make them feel stressed if they cannot finish anything, so they avoid altogether.

✓ Also, some people find that writing a list makes them feel stressed if they cannot finish anything, so they avoid it altogether.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'writing a list'. Also, 'avoid altogether' is incomplete; it should be 'avoid it altogether'.

× Yeah, I'm the 100% writing person.

✓ Yeah, I'm 100% a writing person.

The phrase 'the 100% writing person' is awkward and incorrect. It should be '100% a writing person' to express the idea clearly.

× So instead of digital tools, I prefer to use like write it down on the paper.

✓ So instead of digital tools, I prefer to write it down on paper.

The phrase 'prefer to use like write it down' is incorrect and redundant; 'prefer to write it down' is correct. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general reference.

× Yeah, I use every everything.

✓ Yeah, I use everything.

The phrase 'every everything' is incorrect; 'everything' alone is sufficient and correct.

× Probably as a traditional person I love to write down so it may keep me clear and can organize like like the Today list for.

✓ Probably, as a traditional person, I love to write things down because it helps me stay clear and organized, like with today's list.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing commas for clarity, incorrect conjunction 'so' which should be 'because' to show reason, awkward phrasing 'keep me clear and can organize' which should be 'helps me stay clear and organized', and incomplete phrase 'like like the Today list for' which should be 'like with today's list'.