List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You need to use correct vocabulary and grammar to make your answer clear and natural. For example, instead of 'make Lisbon', say 'make a list'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. Try to link your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and ensures I get everything I need efficiently.

提案: Try to improve your sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and be more specific about how lists help you at work.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because I tend to forget tasks. This method helps me stay organized and avoid mistakes, which is crucial for my career.

提案: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Avoid awkward phrases like 'excuse that skills'. Also, provide more specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory. However, if they struggle to remember tasks, making a list can be very helpful.

提案: Work on sentence completion and grammar. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I can carry all my notes in one device, and it can store much more information than paper.

× I usually make Lisbon at shops.

✓ I usually make lists at shops.

The word 'Lisbon' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects the meaning, it is corrected to 'lists'.

× I think it's enhance my memories and it can help me collect things appropriately.

✓ I think it enhances my memory and it can help me collect things appropriately.

The verb 'enhance' should be in the third person singular present tense 'enhances' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'memories' should be singular 'memory' to refer to the ability to remember. This corrects subject-verb agreement and noun number.

× So I usually do that when I go on department stores to grab some of my ingredients in the supermarket.

✓ So I usually do that when I go to department stores to grab some of my ingredients in the supermarket.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'go' and 'department stores'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place.

× Yes, I make a lot of lists to my work 'cause I'm really a forgetful type of person.

✓ Yes, I make a lot of lists for my work 'cause I'm really a forgetful type of person.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating the purpose or recipient of the lists.

× So I try to memorize things as much as I can, especially things like work, which is very important to me and my career parts.

✓ So I try to memorize things as much as I can, especially things like work, which are very important to me and my career.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'things' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'career parts' is awkward; 'career' alone is sufficient.

× So I have to do it perfectly and avoid any further mistakes that come from forgetful.

✓ So I have to do it perfectly and avoid any further mistakes that come from being forgetful.

The adjective 'forgetful' needs to be used as a noun or gerund phrase 'being forgetful' to correctly complete the sentence.

× I think the main reasons why they don't like to making lists because they are lazy to do so.

✓ I think the main reason why they don't like making lists is because they are lazy to do so.

After 'like', the verb should be in the -ing form without 'to'. Also, 'reasons' should be singular 'reason' to agree with the singular verb 'is'.

× They believe they can memorize this in their head and they can do responsibly.

✓ They believe they can memorize this in their heads and they can do it responsibly.

The phrase 'in their head' should be plural 'in their heads' as each person has their own head. Also, 'do responsibly' needs the object 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× I really agree with that view if they really can excuse that skills, but if not I will suggest it to make a list.

✓ I really agree with that view if they really can execute those skills, but if not I will suggest making a list.

The verb 'excuse' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'execute'. Also, 'that skills' is incorrect; it should be 'those skills' to match plural noun. 'Suggest it to make a list' is awkward; 'suggest making a list' is correct.

× I prefer to make a list on my phones definitely because it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone definitely because it's more convenient.

The noun 'phones' should be singular 'phone' because a person usually has one phone for this context.

× You can carry your notes around with just one gadget and one device and combine all things that is important to you.

✓ You can carry your notes around with just one gadget and one device and combine all things that are important to you.

The verb 'is' should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'all things'.

× It can come by large number of informations than just the paper because you have a lot of storage within your phones which.

✓ It can store a larger amount of information than just paper because you have a lot of storage within your phone.

'Come by large number of informations' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'store a larger amount of information'. 'Informations' is uncountable and should be singular 'information'. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' here.