List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, avoid minor errors like 'More over' (should be 'Moreover') and try to use more varied vocabulary. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, I can easily check off items as I buy them, which keeps me organized.

提案: Your response addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'It I have found it is almost every time helpful' and 'retain more productivity.' Try to use clearer, more natural expressions and correct sentence structures.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list at the beginning of my workday. I find it very helpful because it keeps me focused and increases my productivity.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar ('making this' should be 'making lists', 'a tedious work' should be 'tedious work') and by using linking words more effectively to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be tedious. Additionally, they may not know all their tasks at once and discover new ones as the day goes on.

提案: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but some sentences are a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to simplify your sentences and correct minor errors like 'on a paper' (should be 'on paper') and improve linking for clarity.

例: It depends on the task. When I study on my computer, I use the Notes app to make lists because it's convenient. However, if I'm reading a book, I prefer writing my list on paper since it's easier to access.

× More over, any item that I have already bought I can just check mark in front of it.

✓ Moreover, any item that I have already bought I can just check off in front of it.

The phrase 'check mark in front of it' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'check off in front of it' or simply 'check off'. 'Check off' is the proper phrasal verb used when marking items as completed or bought.

× I often make the list at the start of my work day and write all the things that I need to do or must be done during the day.

✓ I often make the list at the start of my workday and write all the things that I need to do or that must be done during the day.

The phrase 'work day' should be one word 'workday'. Also, the phrase 'or must be done' is missing the subject 'that' to connect the clause properly. Adding 'that' clarifies the sentence structure.

× It I have found it is almost every time helpful for me since it helps me retain more productivity.

✓ I have found it is almost always helpful for me since it helps me maintain higher productivity.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('It I have found it') causing confusion. 'Almost every time' is better expressed as 'almost always'. Also, 'retain more productivity' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'maintain higher productivity'.

× Some people might not like making this because it can be considered a tedious work.

✓ Some people might not like making lists because it can be considered tedious work.

The pronoun 'this' is unclear and incorrect here; it should be replaced with 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'a tedious work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× As they go through throughout their day, they tend to realize more and more tasks.

✓ As they go through their day, they tend to realize more and more tasks.

The phrase 'go through throughout their day' is redundant. Either 'go through their day' or 'throughout their day' is correct, but not both together.

× This depends upon the type of work I am doing.

✓ This depends on the type of work I am doing.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'upon' in this context. 'Depends on' is the standard usage.

× If I am studying using a computer, I use the Notes application in the computer to make a list which is convenient to use files I am using the computer.

✓ If I am studying using a computer, I use the Notes application on the computer to make a list, which is convenient for the files I am using on the computer.

The preposition 'in the computer' is incorrect; it should be 'on the computer'. Also, the sentence is missing commas and has awkward phrasing; adding commas and rephrasing improves clarity.

× If, however, I am reading a book, I tend to write the list on a paper which is much more accessible.

✓ If, however, I am reading a book, I tend to write the list on paper, which is much more accessible.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable and does not take an article. The correct phrase is 'on paper'.