List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và không tập trung trực tiếp vào câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về việc có hay không làm danh sách khi đi mua sắm, sau đó mới giải thích thêm nếu cần. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy things spontaneously. However, if I need something important, I might ask my parents to get it for me.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời có thể rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do danh sách không hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I often make a list for my study plans. However, they don't work well because I usually fail to follow them strictly.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa ý kiến.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they lack motivation to follow them, and sometimes unexpected events make it hard to stick to the plan.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'announce me'. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it reminds me of the tasks I need to complete.

× If I feel like I'm interested in some items, I just ask my parents to buy it.

✓ If I feel like I'm interested in some items, I just ask my parents to buy them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'items' is plural, so the correct pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number.

× So yeah, I often make a list for my study, but I don't think they work at all because I didn't follow any of them.

✓ So yeah, I often make a list for my study, but I don't think it works at all because I didn't follow any of it.

The word 'list' is singular, so the pronoun referring to it should be singular 'it' and the verb should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject.

× Well, I think maybe they find no motivation to follow the list or sometimes they find it difficult to stick to the list because of unexpected things come up.

✓ Well, I think maybe they find no motivation to follow the list or sometimes they find it difficult to stick to the list because unexpected things come up.

The phrase 'because of unexpected things come up' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'because unexpected things come up' without 'of' and with the verb 'come' properly placed.

× I think a list on the phone would be better because I bring my phone along with me every minute so it can also announce me that how many works left that I have so I can quickly finish all of them.

✓ I think a list on the phone would be better because I bring my phone along with me every minute so it can also notify me how many tasks I have left so I can quickly finish all of them.

The verb 'announce' is incorrectly used with 'me' and the phrase 'how many works left that I have' is awkward. 'Notify me how many tasks I have left' is the correct and natural expression.