List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสม และปรับปรุงความลื่นไหลของประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping at the mall because it helps me find things more easily and saves time.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่ออธิบายประโยชน์ของการทำรายการงาน

例: Absolutely, I always make a to-do list for my work. It works well because it helps me easily find tasks and know what I need to do next.

提案: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและพยายามให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมอย่างชัดเจน ใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็นหรือคำอุทานที่ทำให้คำตอบดูไม่เป็นทางการ

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, I believe making lists is more effective for staying organized.

提案: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดเจนหรือผิด เช่น 'bool' และปรับปรุงความลื่นไหลของประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติ

例: Yes, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is a convenient device that I can carry anywhere. It is very handy and better than using paper.

× Of course, I always make a list when I was shopping at the mall because it provides me comfortable for finding things and make it easier.

✓ Of course, I always make a list when I shop at the mall because it provides me comfort in finding things and makes it easier.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was shopping' with present tense 'always make'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'shop' is appropriate. Also, 'provides me comfortable' is incorrect; 'provides me comfort' is correct. 'Make it easier' should be 'makes it easier' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Of course, I always make a list when I was shopping at the mall because it provides me comfortable for finding things and make it easier.

✓ Of course, I always make a list when I shop at the mall because it provides me comfort in finding things and makes it easier.

The phrase 'comfortable for finding things' is incorrect; the noun 'comfort' should be used instead of the adjective 'comfortable'. Also, 'for finding things' is better expressed as 'in finding things' to indicate purpose.

× Of course, I always make a list when I was shopping at the mall because it provides me comfortable for finding things and make it easier.

✓ Of course, I always make a list when I shop at the mall because it provides me comfort in finding things and makes it easier.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Absolutely, I always make a list from my work. It's really work and fits and searchable for me because it easy for me to find A to do list and know what I need to do next after this.

✓ Absolutely, I always make a list for my work. It really works and is suitable and searchable for me because it's easy for me to find a to-do list and know what I need to do next.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; 'for' is appropriate when indicating purpose. 'It's really work' should be 'It really works' to use the correct verb form. 'Fits and searchable' is awkward; 'is suitable and searchable' is better. 'It easy' should be 'it's easy'. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'.

× Absolutely, I always make a list from my work. It's really work and fits and searchable for me because it easy for me to find A to do list and know what I need to do next after this.

✓ Absolutely, I always make a list for my work. It really works and is suitable and searchable for me because it's easy for me to find a to-do list and know what I need to do next.

The verbs 'work' and 'easy' need to be in correct forms: 'works' and 'is easy' respectively, to agree with singular subjects.

× This question is quite difficult for me because I haven't think about it before. However, I think making to do lists it's really work more than umm, not making lids. Yeah, I also don't know why some people don't make list.

✓ This question is quite difficult for me because I haven't thought about it before. However, I think making to-do lists really works more than, umm, not making lists. Yeah, I also don't know why some people don't make lists.

'Haven't think' should be 'haven't thought' (past participle). 'Making to do lists it's really work' should be 'making to-do lists really works' (correct verb form and removal of unnecessary 'it's'). 'Not making lids' is a typo; should be 'not making lists'. 'Don't make list' should be 'don't make lists' (plural).

× This question is quite difficult for me because I haven't think about it before. However, I think making to do lists it's really work more than umm, not making lids. Yeah, I also don't know why some people don't make list.

✓ This question is quite difficult for me because I haven't thought about it before. However, I think making to-do lists really works more than, umm, not making lists. Yeah, I also don't know why some people don't make lists.

'To do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' to be grammatically correct and consistent.

× Yeah, I do prefer to make a list on my phone because it's a technical devices, it's easy to bring it anywhere and anytime. So it's such a bool and really handy for me, better than.

✓ Yeah, I do prefer to make a list on my phone because it's a technical device; it's easy to carry anywhere and anytime. So it's such a tool and really handy for me, better than paper.

'Devices' should be singular 'device' to agree with 'a'. 'Bring it' is awkward; 'carry' is better. 'Bool' is a typo; should be 'tool'. The sentence ends abruptly; 'better than' should be followed by the comparison object, e.g., 'better than paper'.