List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "when I go shop" and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy experimenting with different products. Therefore, I prefer to explore various options and decide what suits me best when I shop alone.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid vague phrases like "wherever" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for work. Instead, I simply go to the place I need and buy the necessary items as required, which works well for me.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more precise and natural. Avoid filler words like "or or something" and use linking words to explain your point clearly.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they don't want to spend too much time preparing them, especially for tasks like work.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid awkward phrasing like "make at least on my phone" and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to access and check them quickly, as I always have my phone with me.

× I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to experiment or try out different things when I go shop.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to experiment or try out different things when I go shopping.

The verb 'go' is commonly followed by the '-ing' form of another verb to indicate the activity, so 'go shopping' is correct rather than 'go shop'. This is a standard English collocation.

× I find it more interesting to explore various options and then decide which is better for me when I go alone.

✓ I find it more interesting to explore various options and then decide which is better for me when I go on my own.

The phrase 'go alone' is less natural in this context. 'Go on my own' is the correct prepositional phrase to express doing something independently.

× No, I usually don't make a list because for example, when I work in wherever, I wherever I need just go there and buy.

✓ No, I usually don't make a list because, for example, when I work somewhere, I just go there and buy what I need.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Wherever' is incorrectly used twice and the sentence lacks clarity. Replacing 'wherever' with 'somewhere' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I just buy the necessary thing.

✓ I just buy the necessary things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items that are necessary, not just one.

× I think because they don't like to spend a lot of time to making lists for something, for example for their jobs or or something.

✓ I think it's because they don't like to spend a lot of time making lists for something, for example for their jobs or something.

The phrase 'spend time to making' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'spend time making' without 'to'. Also, 'or or' is a repetition error corrected to 'or'.

× OK, I prefer to make at least on my phone because it's easy to see it and check quickly because always I use my phone.

✓ OK, I prefer to make lists at least on my phone because it's easy to see and check quickly since I always use my phone.

The phrase 'make at least on my phone' is unclear; adding 'lists' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'because always I use my phone' is awkward; 'since I always use my phone' is more natural. The pronoun 'it' after 'see' is unnecessary and removed.