List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Хариултандаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдааг засаж, холбоос үг ашиглан яриагаа илүү логик болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it makes the process easier and more organized."

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it makes the process easier and more organized.

提案: Хариултандаа илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар өгч, грамматик алдааг засах хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үг ашиглан хариултыг өргөжүүлээрэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I make a list for my work, and it always helps me stay focused and complete tasks efficiently."

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it always helps me stay focused and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: Хариултандаа илүү тодорхой тайлбар өгч, утга санаагаа илүү тодорхой илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үг ашиглан хариултыг сайжруулна уу. Жишээ нь, "In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously without planning."

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously without planning.

提案: Грамматик алдааг засаж, илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос үг ашиглан хариултыг сайжруулна уу. Жишээ нь, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it helps save trees and is more convenient and efficient."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it helps save trees and is more convenient and efficient.

× I always do it when I do shopping.

✓ I always do it when I go shopping.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'shopping'. The correct expression is 'go shopping' to indicate the activity of shopping.

× It's make easy to do shop and.

✓ It makes shopping easy.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'It's make' should be 'It makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'to do shop and' is unclear and should be simplified to 'shopping'.

× It's works.

✓ It works.

The auxiliary 'is' ('It's') is incorrectly combined with 'works'. The correct form is 'It works' without 'is'.

× Yeah, always works.

✓ Yeah, it always works.

The subject 'it' is missing before 'always works'. The verb 'works' requires a third person singular subject.

× I don't know in my opinion maybe they don't need any list, they can work that list.

✓ I don't know. In my opinion, maybe they don't need any list; they can work without a list.

The phrase 'work that list' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'without' to indicate not needing a list. Also, sentence punctuation is improved for clarity.

× Oh it's obvious my phone because it's wasted so many trees by using paper.

✓ Oh, it's obvious I prefer my phone because using paper wastes so many trees.

The phrase 'it's wasted so many trees' is incorrect. The correct form is 'using paper wastes so many trees'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× So I need to do this for my phone.

✓ So I prefer to do this on my phone.

The phrase 'do this for my phone' is unclear. The correct expression is 'do this on my phone' to indicate the medium used.

× It's make it easy and comfortable and no waste.

✓ It makes it easy, comfortable, and waste-free.

'It's make' should be 'It makes' to agree with the singular subject. Also, the sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.