List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'going to the shopping' and 'make the list' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget some items otherwise. Therefore, I prepare the list beforehand to ensure I buy everything I need. This helps me avoid multiple trips to the store and saves time.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'make the least' and 'doing that I typically not miss'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete at work. I start my day by reviewing this list, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything. As a result, I become more productive throughout the day.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has several errors such as 'make the least' instead of 'make the list' and incomplete sentences. Try to use more precise vocabulary and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect reasons logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it feels like a repetitive routine, especially if their tasks are similar every day. Additionally, some may find it time-consuming or unnecessary, which discourages them from creating lists regularly.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical mistakes like 'in the paper' instead of 'on paper' and repeated phrases. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve flow.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have it with me. I usually start my day by checking my digital list, which helps me stay organized. I avoid paper lists since I often lose them during the day.

× I usually make the list whenever I go to the shopping because I have this tendency to miss out some of the things when going to the shopping.

✓ I usually make a list whenever I go shopping because I have this tendency to miss some things when going shopping.

The phrase 'the shopping' is incorrect here; 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' because it is not a specific list previously mentioned. 'Miss out some of the things' should be 'miss some things' for natural usage.

× So I usually make the list and take that so that I do not miss anything and I get all the things whenever I get back to the home.

✓ So I usually make a list and take it so that I do not miss anything and I get all the things whenever I get back home.

Again, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list. 'Take that' is better as 'take it' referring to the list. 'Get back to the home' is incorrect; 'get back home' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I usually make the least for the things that I am going to do at the work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the things that I am going to do at work.

'Make the least' is a typo; it should be 'make a list'. 'At the work' is incorrect; 'at work' is the correct phrase without 'the'. Also, 'for the things' is better as 'of the things'.

× Typically that is the way I start my day and doing that I typically not miss any of the things that I have to complete by the end of the day, which makes me more productive.

✓ Typically, that is the way I start my day, and by doing that, I typically do not miss any of the things that I have to complete by the end of the day, which makes me more productive.

The sentence lacks proper conjunction and auxiliary verb. 'Doing that I typically not miss' is incorrect; it should be 'by doing that, I typically do not miss'. Commas are needed for clarity.

× I think some people do not like to make the least because it is kind of a routine task for them.

✓ I think some people do not like to make lists because it is kind of a routine task for them.

'Make the least' is a typo; it should be 'make lists' (plural) because people make lists in general, not a specific list.

× So maybe that is the reason they do not want to make the list every day.

✓ So maybe that is the reason they do not want to make a list every day.

'Make the list' should be 'make a list' because it refers to any list, not a specific one.

× And similarly some people are lazy, so they are doing and making this list maybe the extra work for them.

✓ Similarly, some people are lazy, so making this list may be extra work for them.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'They are doing and making this list maybe the extra work' is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'making this list may be extra work'.

× So that is the reason I think they don't want to make the.

✓ So that is the reason I think they don't want to make the list.

The sentence is incomplete; it ends abruptly. Adding 'list' completes the thought.

× I usually make the list on my phone because it is much more convenient that way.

✓ I usually make the list using my phone because it is much more convenient that way.

The preposition 'on' is acceptable but 'using' is more precise when referring to the device used to make the list.

× I start my day by opening the mobile and I tend to have this list of things that I do in the mobile.

✓ I start my day by opening my mobile and I tend to have this list of things that I do on the mobile.

'In the mobile' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the mobile' when referring to using a device.

× I don't like making it in the paper because I I kind of lose that paper by the mid of the day.

✓ I don't like making it on paper because I kind of lose that paper by the middle of the day.

The correct phrase is 'on paper' not 'in the paper'. Also, 'by the mid of the day' should be 'by the middle of the day'.