List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้รูปแบบประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงการเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและมีความเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: It depends on the situation. If I plan to buy many items, I usually make a list on my smartphone. However, if I only need to buy a few things, I think making a list is unnecessary.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น

例: Of course, I always keep a note of my schedule for the next few days because it helps me organize my priority tasks effectively.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง พร้อมทั้งใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เพื่อให้คำตอบมีความเป็นธรรมชาติและเข้าใจง่าย

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and trust that they can remember everything without writing it down.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและชัดเจน

例: It depends on the situation. If I have a notebook with me, I prefer to make notes on paper because it's easier to review. However, if I don't have it, I prefer using my smartphone for convenience.

× It depend on situation, if the day that I would like to buy mini item I will list on my smartphone, but if they that I'm just buy a few thing it's unnecessary to make a list.

✓ It depends on the situation. If the day is that I would like to buy mini items, I will list them on my smartphone, but if it's just a few things, it's unnecessary to make a list.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. 'Situation' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Mini item' should be plural 'mini items' because it refers to multiple items. 'They that I'm just buy a few thing' is incorrect; it should be 'if it's just a few things' to correctly refer to a small quantity. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'a few'.

× I'm always have a note about my schedule to do in in a few day after because it's helped me to organize my priority work what what work that I would like to.

✓ I always have a note about my schedule to do in a few days after because it helps me to organize my priority work, what work I would like to do.

The phrase 'I'm always have' is incorrect; it should be 'I always have' because 'have' is the main verb and does not need 'am'. 'In in' is a repetition error; only one 'in' is needed. 'A few day' should be 'a few days' because 'days' is plural. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present tense context. The sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.

× I think that people would like making this or not the task because they they believe that it is unnecessary and they believe themselves that they can all remember everything that obtained.

✓ I think that people may or may not like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and believe they can remember everything they need.

The phrase 'would like making this or not the task' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'may or may not like making lists'. The repeated 'they they' is an error. 'Believe themselves' is incorrect; it should be 'believe they'. 'Everything that obtained' is incomplete; it should be 'everything they need' or 'everything they have obtained'.

× If I have a book on hand, I prefer make a note on paper because it is easily to review.

✓ If I have a book on hand, I prefer to make a note on paper because it is easy to review.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' before the verb 'make'. 'Easily' is an adverb but the adjective 'easy' is needed here to describe 'to review'.

× But however if I don't have it on hand, I prefer smartphone to technology.

✓ However, if I don't have it on hand, I prefer using my smartphone for technology.

Using both 'But' and 'however' together is redundant; only one is needed. 'Prefer smartphone to technology' is unclear; it should be 'prefer using my smartphone for technology' or 'prefer my smartphone'.