List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va so'z tanlashdagi noaniqliklarni tuzatish zarur. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching. Masalan, "I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what to buy." kabi oddiy va tabiiy gap tuzing.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what I need to buy.

提案: Javobingizni yanada aniq va mantiqiy qilib tuzing. Gaplaringizni to'liq va tushunarli qiling, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively. After completing one task, I know what to do next." kabi.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively. After completing one task, I know what to do next.

提案: Javobingizni yanada aniq va mantiqiy qilib ifodalang. Keraksiz so'zlarni olib tashlang va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory. However, others prefer lists because they help them follow a routine." kabi.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory. However, others prefer lists because they help them follow a routine.

提案: Javobingizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, grammatik xatolarni tuzating. Bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "A few years ago, I preferred making lists on paper because I didn't have a phone. But now, I always use my phone because it's with me and I can easily check my list." kabi.

例: A few years ago, I preferred making lists on paper because I didn't have a phone. But now, I always use my phone because it's with me and I can easily check my list.

× I forgot to sing a special which I buy so I always make a list.

✓ I forgot to sign a special which I buy so I always make a list.

The word 'sing' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sign'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects meaning, it is important to correct. The sentence also has a singular/plural issue with 'special' which is unclear; it likely means 'special item' or 'special offer'. However, focusing on grammar, the main issue is the incorrect verb 'sing' instead of 'sign'.

× some people dislike making list because their memory is very good.

✓ some people dislike making lists because their memory is very good.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Using the plural form is correct when talking about the activity in general.

× some people like making list because they, they are the good person for the routine.

✓ some people like making lists because they are good at routines.

Again, 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity. Also, 'the good person for the routine' is incorrect; it should be 'good at routines' to express the idea properly.

× Before some years ago I I prefer to make a list on my on a paper because at the time I have no phone.

✓ A few years ago, I preferred to make a list on paper because at that time I had no phone.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'a few years ago'. Also, 'have' should be 'had' to indicate past possession. 'On my on a paper' is redundant; 'on paper' is correct.

× But now, now I use my phone always making a list because I my phone is always with me and I can see what should I do or what should I buy.

✓ But now, I always use my phone to make a list because my phone is always with me and I can see what I should do or what I should buy.

The phrase 'use my phone always making a list' is incorrect; it should be 'always use my phone to make a list'. Also, the word order in 'what should I do' should be 'what I should do' in indirect questions. The sentence needs proper word order and infinitive form after 'use'.