List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps my mind organized.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议使用清晰的句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list before working or studying because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and improves my efficiency.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and believe they can manage their tasks without writing them down.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更自然的表达和连接词，使内容更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it sends me reminders, whereas paper lists can be easily forgotten.

× when I go to shopping

✓ when I go shopping

动词go后面直接加动名词-ing形式是不正确的，go后面直接加动词原形表示去做某事。应改为go shopping。

× I think make a list. Make your brain clearly.

✓ I think making a list makes your brain clearer.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。应使用动名词making作主语，且用makes连接谓语，clearly应改为形容词clearer修饰brain。

× when I need to. When did you go go to a walk at least can make do things more clearly and it's it's worth very work I think.

✓ When I need to go for a walk, at least I can do things more clearly, and I think it's very worthwhile.

句子结构混乱，时态和词序错误，重复单词。应调整为完整句子，去除重复，使用正确的词序和时态。

× a very troubleful thing

✓ a very troublesome thing

形容词troubleful不正确，正确形容词为troublesome，表示麻烦的。

× this this this thing is very useless

✓ this thing is very useless

重复使用指示代词this，造成冗余，应去掉多余的this。

× make a list only paper

✓ make a list on paper only

缺少介词on，且only位置不当，应改为on paper only表示“只在纸上”。

× make a list in my phone

✓ make a list on my phone

表示在手机上做某事，介词应为on而非in。