List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a complete sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say, "No, I don't make a list on paper when I shop. Instead, I use my mobile phone because it is a more convenient method to remember the things I need."

例: No, I don't make a list on paper when I shop. Instead, I use my mobile phone because it is a more convenient method to remember the things I need.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, "Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the steps. So, whenever I forget something, the list reminds me and makes my work easier."

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the steps. So, whenever I forget something, the list reminds me and makes my work easier.

提案: Your answer is a bit confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, "In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory. Also, they prefer to use mobile phones to remember things instead of writing lists."

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory. Also, they prefer to use mobile phones to remember things instead of writing lists.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your answer concise and use linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is more convenient than paper. Also, mobile phones can send reminders, which paper lists cannot."

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is more convenient than paper. Also, mobile phones can send reminders, which paper lists cannot.

× No, now in this contemporary era I usually take the help of mobile phone because it is more convenient method to remember the things and.

✓ No, now in this contemporary era I usually take the help of a mobile phone because it is a more convenient method to remember things.

The phrase 'remember the things and' is incomplete and awkward. Also, 'mobile phone' needs an article 'a' before it, and 'more convenient method' requires 'a' before it. The word 'things' does not need 'the' here as it is general. The sentence should end properly without 'and'.

× Yes, I usually take the help of list because whenever I forget any step of the work, the list always give a good idea regarding the work and it is a convenient method to remember the things in work.

✓ Yes, I usually take the help of a list because whenever I forget any step of the work, the list always gives a good idea regarding the work and it is a convenient method to remember things at work.

'List' is a countable noun and needs the article 'a'. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'list' (subject-verb agreement). 'The things in work' is awkward; 'things at work' is more natural. Also, 'remember the things' should be 'remember things' as it is general.

× According to me, the people who have lack of interest to make list because they have good remembering power rather than they have they are option to use mobile phones to remember the things.

✓ According to me, some people lack interest in making lists because they have good memory or they prefer to use mobile phones to remember things.

The original sentence is structurally incorrect and confusing. 'Have lack of interest to make list' should be 'lack interest in making lists'. The phrase 'rather than they have they are option' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'or they prefer to use mobile phones'. 'Remembering power' is better expressed as 'good memory'. Also, 'the things' should be 'things' as it is general.

× I usually prefer mobile phone because in this contemporary era mobile phone always a convenient method to remembering things rather than the list on paper.

✓ I usually prefer the mobile phone because in this contemporary era, the mobile phone is always a convenient method for remembering things rather than a list on paper.

'Mobile phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring specifically. The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'mobile phone'. 'To remembering' is incorrect; it should be 'for remembering'. 'The list on paper' should be 'a list on paper' as it is general.

× Because in list on paper is it vast and typical method or there is no type of remembering notification in list but in mobile phone we have a remembering notification.

✓ Because a list on paper is a vast and typical method, and there is no type of reminder notification in a list, but on a mobile phone, we have reminder notifications.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'In list on paper is it vast and typical method' is incorrect; it should be 'a list on paper is a vast and typical method'. 'Remembering notification' is better expressed as 'reminder notification'. Articles 'a' are needed before 'list' and 'method'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.