List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organised and saves time by preventing me from forgetting items.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but the sentence structure could be improved for clarity. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my daily study tasks. For instance, I write down homework and review topics, which helps me focus and manage my time efficiently.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and plans can change quickly, making lists less useful. Therefore, they prefer to be flexible and decide as situations arise.

提案: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and could be more concise. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid informal phrases like 'beautiful and cute handbooks'.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me organise my thoughts. Additionally, I enjoy using my favourite notebooks for this purpose.

× Yes, I like to make a list when I go shopping because I'm writing down the things I need before going shopping helps me to keep organized and it helps me to avoid wasting time thinking about what I need when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list when I go shopping because writing down the things I need before going shopping helps me to keep organised and it helps me to avoid wasting time thinking about what I need when I go shopping.

The phrase 'I'm writing down' is incorrect here because the gerund form 'writing' should be used as the subject of the sentence, not the present continuous tense. Using 'writing' correctly functions as a noun phrase, which is appropriate in this context.

× Because making list also needs time and most of the time the things change very fast as we can't predict them in advance.

✓ Because making lists also needs time and most of the time the things change very fast as we can't predict them in advance.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one. Using the plural form correctly matches the intended meaning.

× So sometimes making lists will be even in the end.

✓ So sometimes making lists will be pointless in the end.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'will be even in the end' is incorrect. A clearer expression is 'will be pointless in the end' to convey that making lists may not be useful sometimes. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have already beautiful and cute handbooks that I use to make a list.

✓ I already have beautiful and cute handbooks that I use to make lists.

The phrase 'I have already beautiful and cute handbooks' is awkward; 'I already have' is the correct word order. Also, 'make a list' should be plural 'make lists' to indicate the general activity. These changes improve naturalness and grammatical accuracy.