List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (helped -> helps) và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn, tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items. For example, I write down everything I need at home so I can shop efficiently in the store.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (puncture, not, clear). Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember all my tasks and complete them on time. However, sometimes I still miss deadlines, but I am trying to improve my time management.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng cách diễn đạt trang trọng hơn, tránh dùng từ lóng như "wanna" và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe it does not help them work more effectively. Also, some may feel it is unnecessary or too much effort.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (refer to -> prefer, help -> helps). Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It is convenient and saves time since I don't need to carry extra paper.

× I always make a list at home first to ensure I don't forget anything important when I shopping in a store.

✓ I always make a list at home first to ensure I don't forget anything important when I am shopping in a store.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct structure is 'I am shopping' instead of 'I shopping'. This is necessary to indicate an ongoing action.

× It helps me complete the work puncture and I can remember all the not.

✓ It helps me complete the work punctually and I can remember all the notes.

The word 'puncture' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'punctually', an adverb describing completing work on time. Also, 'not' should be 'notes' to make sense. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× However sometimes I don't work anything on time.

✓ However, sometimes I don't complete any work on time.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Don't work anything' is incorrect; the verb 'complete' fits better with 'work'. Adding a comma after 'However' improves sentence flow.

× I hope I will clear.

✓ I hope I will be clear.

The verb 'clear' needs to be used with the verb 'be' to form the future tense correctly. 'I will be clear' indicates the speaker's hope to be clear in the future.

× As far as I think many people are so lazy or they don't wanna make a list because they think it doesn't help them work effectively and other people think so time consuming with them.

✓ As far as I think, many people are lazy or don't want to make a list because they think it doesn't help them work effectively, and others think it is too time-consuming for them.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Wanna' should be 'want to' for formal correctness. 'Other people think so time consuming with them' is incorrect; it should be 'others think it is too time-consuming for them'. Adding commas improves readability.

× I refer to make a list on my phone because I keep my phone anywhere in my wallet.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I keep my phone anywhere in my wallet.

The verb 'refer to' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'anywhere in my wallet' is awkward; 'anywhere' is unnecessary or should be replaced with 'always' or 'usually'. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar problems from the list, the main correction is changing 'refer to' to 'prefer'.

× Additionally, it help me save time to carry everywhere.

✓ Additionally, it helps me save time carrying it everywhere.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'to carry everywhere' is awkward; 'carrying it everywhere' is more natural. The pronoun 'it' clarifies what is being carried.

× So easy to hold in the back, it's convenient for me.

✓ It is so easy to hold in the back; it's convenient for me.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence. Using a semicolon connects the two related clauses properly.