List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like "more easier" (use "easier" alone). Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I don't have to waste time deciding what to buy while at the store, which makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I make lists when I have many tasks to complete. Writing them down in my notebook helps me prioritize and ensures I don't forget anything, so it definitely works well for me.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and specific details. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike lists, and support it with examples or explanations. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous. For instance, they might feel that lists limit their freedom to choose what to do at any moment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear preference statement, then explain why using specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them anytime. Also, since I keep my phone organized, it's simple to access my lists whenever I need to.

× I always make a list for the shopping because it makes the work more easier and comfortable.

✓ I always make a list for shopping because it makes the work easier and more comfortable.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative form. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. Also, 'the shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' as an activity does not need 'the'. The correct phrase is 'for shopping'.

× Yes I do or whenever I I have so many work in all together then I just make a list and what to do what to not to do.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I have so much work altogether, I just make a list of what to do and what not to do.

The phrase 'so many work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'much' instead of 'many'. Also, 'in all together' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'altogether'. The sentence structure was unclear and needed punctuation and rephrasing for clarity.

× I make all the things shortly I write in a notebook so that it and its work.

✓ I make a brief list and write it in a notebook so that it works.

The original sentence is unclear and contains pronoun errors. 'All the things shortly' is awkward; 'a brief list' is clearer. 'So that it and its work' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'so that it works'.

× Sometimes we have to do so many things all along.

✓ Sometimes we have to do so many things all at once.

The phrase 'all along' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrase to express doing many things simultaneously is 'all at once'.

× They do the whatever thing they like.

✓ They do whatever thing they like.

The phrase 'the whatever thing' is incorrect. 'Whatever' already functions as a determiner, so 'the' should be omitted.

× Yes, I prefer a list on my phone.

✓ Yes, I prefer making a list on my phone.

The phrase 'prefer a list' is awkward. The correct expression is 'prefer making a list' or 'prefer to make a list'.

× It's easier for me to make a list over alone and I can do it properly.

✓ It's easier for me to make a list on my own and I can do it properly.

The phrase 'make a list over alone' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'make a list on my own', meaning independently.

× I always clean my phone so I it's easy for me to make a list on my phone and do the work whatever I want to do.

✓ I always clean my phone, so it's easy for me to make a list on it and do whatever work I want to do.

The original sentence has a redundant pronoun 'I' and awkward phrasing. Removing the extra 'I' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and correctness.