List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because if I don't make a list I forget to buy what I need. And making a list also save waste time and money.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I always prepare a list before working because I often forget something that I need to do and making a list also helps me complete work efficiently.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming. However, I believe that making a list can help people organize their works efficiently.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. Writing on paper causes a trouble because I often look for paper and pencils.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 文法の誤り（"save waste time"は不自然）を修正し、より自然で効果的な表現にしましょう。また、接続詞を使って文の流れをスムーズにすると良いです。
例: Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because if I don't, I tend to forget what I need. Moreover, making a list helps me save both time and money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 文を分けて、接続詞を使いながら論理的に繋げるとより良いです。また、"complete work efficiently"の部分を具体的に説明すると説得力が増します。
例: Yes, I always prepare a list before working because I often forget tasks. In addition, making a list helps me manage my time better and complete my work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 85.0提案: "time consuming"のスペースを修正し、"works"は不可算名詞なので"work"に直しましょう。さらに、理由と意見を明確に区別して述べると良いです。
例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. However, I believe that making a list helps people organize their work more efficiently.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: "causes a trouble"は不自然な表現なので修正しましょう。また、理由をより具体的に述べて、文をつなげる接続詞を使うと良いです。
例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. On the other hand, writing on paper can be troublesome since I often have to look for paper and pencils.
文法
× And making a list also save waste time and money.
✓ And making a list also saves time and money.
The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'waste' is unnecessary here and should be removed to correct the sentence.
× and making a list also helps me complete work efficiently.
✓ and making a list also helps me complete my work efficiently.
The noun 'work' here should be preceded by the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose work is being referred to, improving clarity and correctness.
× I believe that making a list can help people organize their works efficiently.
✓ I believe that making a list can help people organize their work efficiently.
The noun 'work' is uncountable in this context and should not be pluralized as 'works'. Using 'work' is grammatically correct here.
× Writing on paper causes a trouble because I often look for paper and pencils.
✓ Writing on paper causes trouble because I often look for paper and pencils.
The word 'trouble' is uncountable and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.
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