List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and conclude properly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, sometimes I forget important items, so having a list ensures I don't miss anything.

提案: Your answer repeats ideas and has unclear phrases. Try to avoid redundancy and use clear, complete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why making lists helps you. Also, avoid incomplete words or phrases.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because sometimes I forget important tasks. It works well for me because it saves time and helps me stay organised.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is incomplete and contains some incorrect word choices. Make sure to complete your sentences and use correct vocabulary. For example, use 'restrict' instead of 'least limit' and complete your thoughts fully.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and feel it restricts their creativity. They prefer to keep their plans flexible rather than structured. Additionally, some individuals might find lists overwhelming, especially if they have many tasks.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full response with reasons. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me when I go to the market. This way, I can easily check my list anytime without carrying extra paper.

× Yes, I make a list when I am going to shopping because it's very helpful.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I am going shopping because it's very helpful.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when indicating an activity. The correct form is 'going shopping'.

× Sometimes I forget some things to buy in market so that's why I regularly make a list.

✓ Sometimes I forget some things to buy in the market so that's why I regularly make a list.

The noun 'market' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'market' is incorrect in this context.

× But can I buy in my?

✓ But can I buy it myself?

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' and 'myself' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because of sometimes I forget my important work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because sometimes I forget my important tasks.

The phrase 'because of sometimes' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient. Also, 'work' is better replaced with 'tasks' to avoid repetition and improve clarity.

× Yes, it's working because of It's really helpful for me because sometimes I forget my important work then it's time save, sav, saviour and.

✓ Yes, it works because it's really helpful for me; sometimes I forget my important work, so it saves time and is a saviour.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting verb tense to 'works', removing 'because of' before 'It's', and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time consuming and destructive.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and distracting.

The word 'destructive' is incorrect in this context; 'distracting' better conveys the intended meaning. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective.

× They may feel that least limit their creativity, performing to keep their plans flexible rather than structured.

✓ They may feel that lists limit their creativity, preferring to keep their plans flexible rather than structured.

The word 'least' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'performing' is incorrect here; 'preferring' fits the intended meaning.

× Additionally, some individual might find list overwhelming, especially if.

✓ Additionally, some individuals might find lists overwhelming, especially if...

The singular 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because of when I go to the market almost my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I go to the market, I almost always have my phone with me.

The phrase 'because of when' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'I almost always have my phone with me' clarifies the meaning.