List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to form a complete sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, provide more specific details about what you include in your shopping list and why you make it. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember essential items like groceries and household supplies. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary things and save time.

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, you can add a specific example of how the timetable helps you.

例: I don't make a list for work, but I create a timetable instead. It helps me stay organized by showing my upcoming tasks, so I can plan my day efficiently. For example, I allocate specific hours for meetings and project work, which improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas more clearly. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists and use linking words to connect your points.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and handle tasks as they come. Additionally, not everyone feels the need to stay organized, and some find lists restrictive or time-consuming.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and informal expressions. Try to use correct grammar and avoid casual phrases like "and yeah." Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

例: If I were to make a list, I would prefer to use my phone because it is easier to access and saves time. In contrast, paper lists can be misplaced, and I would need a pen to write, which can be inconvenient.

× Yes, usually when I go to shopping I make a list, purchase what I desire like groceries or.

✓ Yes, usually when I go shopping I make a list and purchase what I desire, like groceries.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'. Also, the sentence was missing a conjunction to connect the two actions properly.

× Not everybody likes making this.

✓ Not everybody likes making lists.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and unclear in this context. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what is being referred to.

× Everyone, not everyone, has to stay organised and it's better to.

✓ Not everyone has to stay organized, and it's better to be organized.

The original sentence is contradictory and incomplete. 'Everyone, not everyone' is confusing; it should be clarified as 'Not everyone'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion for clarity.

× It is more easier to access and not time consuming.

✓ It is easier to access and not time-consuming.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.