List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping. I checked my home, note down things that I have and don't have, build up my list and then go shopping. This helps me to finish my shopping faster and ensures that I don't miss out on important things.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I do make a list at work, but I'd rather call it a schedule. The schedule outlines what I need to do for the day and also during the start of the day I mark the most important things out of my schedule. This enables me to complete the tasks very efficiently.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people don't like making lists because most of the time lists may feel repetitive. That is because most of us have repetitive jobs.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I usually prefer making lists on my phone. This is because it allows me to easily access or retrieve past data. Also in phones we have a very important feature, or rather I would say a very useful feature called as reminders. I can mark a list a particular item as to be reminded and it reminds.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I checked my home' and 'note down things', say 'I check my home and note down items I need'. Also, use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping. I check my home and note down items I need, so I can shop quickly and not forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words like 'then' to show sequence and avoid repeating 'schedule' too often. For example, say 'I make a schedule that outlines my daily tasks, then I mark the most important ones at the start of the day.'
例: Yes, I make a schedule that outlines my daily tasks, then I mark the most important ones at the start of the day. This helps me complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: Try to give more specific reasons and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'most of the time'.
例: Some people don't like making lists because their tasks are repetitive, so writing the same lists every day feels boring.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: Make your answer more fluent by combining sentences and using linking words like 'and' or 'so'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'called as reminders'.
例: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because I can easily access past data and set reminders for important items, so I never forget them.
文法
× I checked my home, note down things that I have and don't have, build up my list and then go shopping.
✓ I check my home, note down things that I have and don't have, build up my list and then go shopping.
The sentence mixes past tense 'checked' with present tense verbs 'note down' and 'build up'. To maintain consistency and match the habitual action context, all verbs should be in the present tense.
× Also in phones we have a very important feature, or rather I would say a very useful feature called as reminders.
✓ Also, on phones we have a very important feature, or rather I would say a very useful feature called reminders.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to devices like phones; 'on' is the correct preposition. Additionally, 'called as' is incorrect; it should be 'called' without 'as'.
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