List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'save for time and money' và câu ví dụ không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Ví dụ, thay vì 'what's with I stuck to my list and avoid infuses purchase?', bạn có thể nói rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember all the essential items I need. Moreover, having a list prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which saves both time and money. For example, last week I stuck to my list and avoided impulse purchases, so I spent less than usual.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, nhưng có lỗi từ vựng như 'Borax' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh. Hãy sử dụng từ đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi trong câu trả lời.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day before I start. It helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete and ensures that nothing is forgotten. For example, by checking off each item, I can keep track of my progress and feel more productive throughout the day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Câu 'they refer to work spontaneously' và 'let's restrict their activity' không chính xác. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. They like to follow their thoughts as they come and do tasks immediately, rather than planning everything in an organized way. For example, they may feel that making lists restricts their freedom and flexibility.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'refer to make' nên là 'prefer to make' và 'This help' nên là 'This helps'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ để tăng tính tự nhiên.

例: Nowadays, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and easily accessible whenever I need to check my notes. For example, it can be very difficult to find a small piece of paper, but my phone is always with me, so I can quickly look at my list. This helps me stay organized and save time.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me check that I have both other essential items I need.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me check that I have all the other essential items I need.

The phrase 'both other essential items' is incorrect because 'both' is used for two items, but 'other essential items' implies more than two. The correct quantifier here is 'all the' to refer to multiple items.

× Also, having a list prevents me from buying unnecessary things which save for time and money.

✓ Also, having a list prevents me from buying unnecessary things which save time and money.

The phrase 'save for time and money' is incorrect. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'save time and money' meaning to reduce the amount of time and money spent.

× For example, what's with I stuck to my list and avoid infuses purchase?

✓ For example, I stick to my list and avoid impulsive purchases.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'What's with I stuck' is incorrect structure. The correct sentence uses present tense 'I stick' and correct adjective 'impulsive' instead of 'infuses', and 'purchases' as plural noun.

× It helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete and ensure that nothing is forgotten.

✓ It helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete and ensures that nothing is forgotten.

The verb 'ensure' should agree with the singular subject 'It' and be in third person singular form 'ensures'.

× For example, by checking out each item, I can keep track of my Borax and feel more productive throughout the day.

✓ For example, by checking off each item, I can keep track of my progress and feel more productive throughout the day.

The phrase 'checking out each item' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'checking off each item' meaning to mark items as done. Also, 'Borax' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; the correct word is 'progress'.

× I think some people don't like making this because they refer to work spontaneously.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'refer to work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer to work'.

× For example, they may feel that let's restrict their activity and flexibility.

✓ For example, they may feel that lists restrict their activity and flexibility.

The phrase 'let's restrict' is incorrect here. The intended meaning is that 'lists restrict' their activity and flexibility. 'Let's' is a contraction for 'let us' and does not fit the sentence.

× Nowadays, I refer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and easily accessible wherever I need to check my note.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and easily accessible whenever I need to check my notes.

The phrase 'I refer to make a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I prefer to make a list'. Also, 'wherever' is better replaced by 'whenever' to indicate time, and 'note' should be plural 'notes'.

× This help me stay organized and save time.

✓ This helps me stay organized and save time.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular) instead of 'help'.