List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Uh, honestly, I don't usually I, I don't used to like play a little before I went to the shop because I'm, I'm random guy, you know, and I prefer to buy what I want. When I saw them, yeah.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, absolutely. I make a list for my work everyday and for me it's really work, you know? And I know how what I need to do today and what I need to finish. It helps me to clear up my mind.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
To be honest, there's always some people don't like making this because like they don't want to be constrained by the list, you know? And I think make a list will constrain them to do something they want.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
To me, I prefer to make a list on the paper because I can see it like I people in this in this age use too much foam and I I think if you write your list on the paper it makes you feel more formal.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用一两句具体说明原因。
例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to buy things spontaneously. I prefer to choose what I want when I see it in the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较好，但有些语法和表达不够准确。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it really helps me. It allows me to know what tasks I need to complete and keeps my mind organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 表达有些重复且不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免口语化词汇，清楚表达观点。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them. They prefer to have the freedom to do things as they wish without following a plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答不够流畅，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化表达，明确说明理由，并避免重复。
例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can see them clearly. Also, writing on paper feels more formal than using a phone.
文法
× I don't used to like play a little before I went to the shop because I'm, I'm random guy, you know, and I prefer to buy what I want.
✓ I didn't use to like playing a little before I went to the shop because I'm a random guy, you know, and I prefer to buy what I want.
这里的'don't used to'是错误的过去时表达，正确的表达是'didn't use to'，表示过去习惯。'like play'应改为'like playing'，因为动词like后接动名词。'I'm random guy'缺少冠词，应为'a random guy'。
× I'm, I'm random guy, you know, and I prefer to buy what I want.
✓ I'm a random guy, you know, and I prefer to buy what I want.
'random guy'前缺少不定冠词'a'，英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。
× I make a list for my work everyday and for me it's really work, you know?
✓ I make a list for my work every day and for me it really works, you know?
'everyday'是形容词，表示'日常的'，此处应使用副词短语'every day'表示'每天'。'it's really work'主谓不一致，应为'it really works'。
× I make a list for my work everyday and for me it's really work, you know?
✓ I make a list for my work every day and for me it really works, you know?
'work'作为不可数名词时不加冠词，且此处应使用动词形式'works'。
× I can see it like I people in this in this age use too much foam and I I think if you write your list on the paper it makes you feel more formal.
✓ I can see it like people in this age use too much phone and I think if you write your list on paper it makes you feel more formal.
'I people'中多余的'I'应去掉。'foam'应为'phone'。'on the paper'中'the'不必要，通常说'on paper'。
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