List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达重复且句子结构不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并且用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously, which sometimes leads me to buy more than I planned.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅，同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: Sometimes I make lists for my work because I have many different tasks. Without a list, my work becomes hectic, so lists help me stay focused.

提案: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用更简洁明了的句子表达观点，并且避免重复使用“I think”。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer more freedom in their daily activities.

提案: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议减少重复，使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because we always carry it with us, and paper lists are less convenient nowadays.

× I sometime make some list because most of my work I have a lot different part, different task and if I didn't make any list I will be it will be hectic for me.

✓ I sometimes make some lists because most of my work has a lot of different parts and different tasks, and if I don't make any list it will be hectic for me.

这里'sometime'应为'sometimes'表示频率；'some list'应为'some lists'，因为有多个部分和任务；'a lot different part'应为'a lot of different parts'，名词需复数；'different task'应为'different tasks'，名词需复数；'most of my work I have'结构不正确，应改为'most of my work has'，work作为整体单数，动词用单数形式；'if I didn't make'时态不对，应为'if I don't make'，表示现在或将来条件。

× most of my work I have a lot different part, different task

✓ most of my work has a lot of different parts and different tasks

主语'most of my work'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'have'应改为'has'。

× if I didn't make any list I will be it will be hectic for me.

✓ if I don't make any list it will be hectic for me.

条件句中，表示现在或将来事实的条件句应使用一般现在时，'didn't make'应改为'don't make'。

× I usually buy a little more than I ever expected.

✓ I usually buy a little more than I ever expect.

这里时态应保持一致，'expected'是过去时，句子描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时'expect'。

× Actually, no, because I'm the person who dislikes making any shopping list, so every time when I go to the shop I usually buy a little more than I ever expected.

✓ Actually, no, because I'm the person who dislikes making any shopping list, so every time when I go to the shop I usually buy a little more than I ever expect.

句子描述习惯性动作，时态应为一般现在时，'expected'应改为'expect'。

× So I think but but actually we do not use paper frequently nowadays.

✓ So I think, but actually we do not use paper frequently nowadays.

句中重复使用'but'，应去掉多余的一个，避免冗余。

× I think maybe sometimes we will feel being trapped by our list that is not very free, so I think that's why people don't like making a list.

✓ I think maybe sometimes we feel trapped by our list, which makes us feel not very free, so I think that's why people don't like making a list.

'feel being trapped'结构不正确，应改为'feel trapped'；'that is not very free'表达不自然，改为'which makes us feel not very free'更通顺。