List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余。可以使用更自然的表达方式，并且句子应简洁明了。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. For example, I usually write down items like milk, bread, and cooking oil to make sure I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me follow the steps and complete all tasks. For example, when I do my homework, I check the list to make sure I don't forget anything.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇表达原因，并且句子结构要完整，避免模糊和重复。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their time and freedom. They may also feel anxious about completing tasks within a set schedule.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法和词汇，清楚表达偏好和理由。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper can be easily lost or damaged. With my phone, I can check my list anytime and anywhere.

× Before I go to the shop I will make at least to mark down what I need to buy.

✓ Before I go to the shop, I will at least mark down what I need to buy.

句中 'make at least to mark down' 结构不正确，'make' 后不应接不定式 'to mark'，应直接使用动词原形 'mark'。建议去掉 'make'，改为 'at least mark down'。

× For example, when I go to the supermarket I'll list down what I need to buy in the supermarket like milk or food to make sure me to buy oil.

✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket, I'll list down what I need to buy, like milk or food, to make sure I buy oil.

句中 'make sure me to buy oil' 用法错误，'make sure' 后应接从句，且主语应为 'I'，故改为 'make sure I buy oil'。

× I think it is worked because it can help me to follow the steps and finish all the work.

✓ I think it works because it can help me to follow the steps and finish all the work.

此处表达现在的事实，故应使用一般现在时 'works'，而非过去时 'worked'。

× When I am working I can check the list what I forget and I will finish it, for example when I am doing my homework.

✓ When I am working, I can check the list to see what I forgot and I will finish it, for example when I am doing my homework.

句中 'check the list what I forget' 结构不正确，应改为 'check the list to see what I forgot'，且 'forget' 应用过去式 'forgot'。

× I think they don't like the list to limit their time.

✓ I think they don't like the list because it limits their time.

原句表达不清，'the list to limit their time' 结构不正确，应改为 'because it limits their time'，使句意明确。

× They would like freedom working and don't want any new rejection for their work.

✓ They would like freedom at work and don't want any new restrictions on their work.

'freedom working' 用法错误，应为 'freedom at work'；'rejection' 用词不当，应为 'restrictions'（限制）。

× The list will lead them to feel anxious for finishing their work.

✓ The list will make them feel anxious about finishing their work.

'lead them to feel anxious for finishing' 结构不自然，常用表达为 'make them feel anxious about finishing'。

× I prefer make at least on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'prefer' 后应接不定式 'to make'，且 'at least' 用法不当，应改为 'a list'。

× I think paper have many limitations like paper or a lot and broken and I can check it anytime anywhere because is being on my board.

✓ I think paper has many limitations, like being easily torn or broken, and I can check it anytime, anywhere because it is on my phone.

'paper have' 主谓不一致，应为 'paper has'；'like paper or a lot and broken' 语义不清，改为 'like being easily torn or broken'；'because is being on my board' 结构错误，改为 'because it is on my phone'。