List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. Also, use correct words like 'shop' instead of 'stop'. Try to make your answer more natural and clear by focusing on the main point and giving specific reasons.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and save money. For example, last week I stuck to my list and only bought what I needed.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding awkward phrases like 'if the list is only on my mind'. Try to explain more naturally how making a list helps you focus.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it helps me stay focused and organized. For instance, by listing my tasks, I can prioritize them and avoid distractions throughout the day.

提案: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Use plural form 'lists' and avoid repeating ideas. Also, give more specific reasons why some people dislike making lists, and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. However, I believe lists help improve focus and productivity, which is why I make one every morning.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'I prefer' and use better linking words. Also, correct phrases like 'learned it to write in paper' to 'learned to write on paper'.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's a habit I learned from my parents since childhood. Writing by hand feels more personal and helps me remember tasks better than using my phone.

× I definitely make lists when I stop because if I do not make lists then I'm going to buy everything that's on site and I don't think that's a good thing.

✓ I definitely make lists when I shop because if I do not make lists then I'm going to buy everything that's on site and I don't think that's a good thing.

The word 'stop' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shop' which matches the context of buying items. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects sentence clarity.

× I think that some people take making list as a chore which is not.

✓ I think that some people take making lists as a chore which it is not.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists. Also, adding 'it' before 'is not' improves sentence clarity.

× I personally prefer to make a list on a paper because I am traditional in that way.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on paper because I am traditional in that way.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary when referring to paper in general. The correct phrase is 'on paper' without an article.