List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentence structures to express your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping easier.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks because it helps me keep track of my assignments and prepare the necessary documents efficiently.

提案: Your response is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to explain reasons clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to remember things naturally.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases. Provide a clear preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to edit and carry with me wherever I go.

× Yes, I make the list good to and shop because easily carry on my all things and remembering my all things memory, so I carry on a list.

✓ Yes, I make a good list when I shop because it helps me carry all my things easily and remember everything.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. The phrase 'make the list good to and shop' is confusing and ungrammatical. Also, 'carry on my all things' and 'remembering my all things memory' are incorrect expressions. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure and clearer expressions to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I make a list of order by burka because I am carrying remember my all bark assignments and prepare my all documents. So I carry on a list of fall back.

✓ Yes, I make a list of orders because I need to remember all my work assignments and prepare all my documents. So, I keep a backup list.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'order by burka', 'carrying remember my all bark assignments', and 'carry on a list of fall back'. These are not grammatically correct or meaningful. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× Some people say don't lie because waste of time remember so so don't use like a person.

✓ Some people say making lists is a waste of time and they don't like to use them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Phrases like 'say don't lie' and 'so so don't use like a person' do not make sense. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended idea.

× How's the grand making restaurant on my phone because. I can use my phone to change my things, so usually I'm using.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because I can easily change my items, so I usually use it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'How's the grand making restaurant on my phone because.' The correction forms a complete, clear sentence with proper grammar and meaning.