List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较长且有些重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I don't visit the supermarket often, so I want to buy everything I need for the week in one trip.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且用词不准确。建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语化和模糊的词汇。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it usually helps me stay organized. However, unexpected events sometimes force me to change my plans.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，存在语法错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to do things spontaneously. Others might find making lists stressful because it adds pressure to their day.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整回答问题，保持句子完整和逻辑清晰。

例: It depends on the situation. When I travel, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. But for studying or work, I usually write lists on paper because it helps me focus better.

× I often make a list when I go to the supermarket since I don't have much time to go there very often, so I have to make sure that I can buy all the things in this in one time to fulfill my weekly supply.

✓ I often make a list when I go to the supermarket since I don't have much time to go there very often, so I have to make sure that I can buy all the things in this in one go to fulfill my weekly supply.

“in one time” 应改为 “in one go”，因为英语中表示“一次性完成”通常用短语“in one go”，而不是“in one time”。这是固定搭配问题，属于单复数和固定表达的使用错误。

× But sometimes, you know, there's so many accidents in our daily life and I'm a broke and I may break the list.

✓ But sometimes, you know, there are so many accidents in our daily life and I'm broke and I may break the list.

“there's so many accidents”中“there's”是“there is”的缩写，主语是复数“accidents”，应使用“there are”。另外，“I'm a broke”中“broke”是形容词，前面不需要冠词“a”。这是单复数和冠词使用错误。

× For example, some people they are just don't like to be limited by a certain list so they can do things at any time they want in a day.

✓ For example, some people just don't like to be limited by a certain list so they can do things at any time they want in a day.

句中“some people they”出现了重复主语，英语中不需要重复，去掉“they”即可。属于代词使用错误。

× And I also reckon that others may feel stressful about making a list which means.

✓ And I also reckon that others may feel stressed about making a list, which means...

“feel stressful”应改为“feel stressed”，因为“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人有压力的”，而“feel”后面应接表示感受的形容词“stressed”。另外，句子末尾“which means”不完整，应补充完整或用省略号表示未完。属于句子结构和形容词使用错误。

× And sometimes, for example, for my study or my working, I prefer to.

✓ And sometimes, for example, for my study or my work, I prefer to.

“my working”用法不当，应改为“my work”，因为“work”作为名词表示工作，而“working”是动名词或现在分词，不适合此处用法。句子末尾“prefer to”不完整，建议补充完整句子。属于句子结构和词性使用错误。