List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid spelling mistakes and use the correct word 'list' instead of 'last'. Also, make your answer more natural by adding a reason or example. For instance, you can say why you make a list or how it helps you.

例: Yes, I usually make a list with all the items I want to buy before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything and saves time.

提案: Be careful with word choice and clarity. The phrase 'I don't do less for every task' is unclear. Also, avoid repeating words like 'rather rather'. Try to give a clear and direct answer with supporting details using linking words.

例: At work, I don't always make a list because it depends on the task. Sometimes I prefer to make a list to stay organized, but other times I work spontaneously if the task is simple.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Instead of repeating 'people are different', explain more specifically why some dislike lists. Also, correct 'lasts' to 'lists'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and find lists restrictive, while others enjoy the structure lists provide.

提案: Use correct expressions like 'either way' instead of 'either ways'. Also, clarify your answer by explaining why you don't mind and how you access both. Use linking words for coherence.

例: I don't mind either way because I can access both my phone and paper lists easily, so it depends on the situation.

× Yes, I usually make a last with all the items that I want to buy before I go to the shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list with all the items that I want to buy before I go to the shop.

The word 'last' is incorrect here; the correct singular noun is 'list'. This is a singular and plural issue because 'last' is not the correct form. The correct word is 'list' which refers to a collection of items.

× At work I don't do less for every task.

✓ At work I don't do lists for every task.

The phrase 'do less' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant 'do lists'. 'Less' is a quantifier used with uncountable nouns, but here the countable noun 'lists' is appropriate. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× Sometimes I prefer to do a list and in some instances I would prefer to go random rather rather than doing a list.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list and in some instances I would prefer to go random rather than making a list.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'list'; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'rather rather' is a repetition error, corrected to a single 'rather'. This is a singular and plural issue and verb usage issue.

× Some people's prefer making lasts while others do not like it.

✓ Some people prefer making lists while others do not like it.

'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural noun 'people' is correct. Also, 'lasts' is incorrect; the plural of 'list' is 'lists'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I don't mind either ways, both are fine with me because I can't access both of them at any time.

✓ I don't mind either way, both are fine with me because I can access both of them at any time.

The phrase 'either ways' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'either way'. Also, 'can't access' contradicts the meaning; it should be 'can access'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and modal verb usage.