List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by making it more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need, especially at the market and grocery stores.

提案: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use a topic sentence followed by supporting details, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. This way, I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer does not directly address the question. Try to give your opinion about why some people might dislike making lists, and support it with reasons or examples. Use clear and complete sentences.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid unnecessary words.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can easily check my list whenever I need to.

× Yes I do making a list for the work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for work.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So, 'do making' is incorrect; it should be 'do make'. Also, 'the work' is better as 'work' here.

× It's remember all the work that I want to do and it's help me remind me I do all the work and not forget anyone.

✓ It helps me remember all the work I want to do, and it helps remind me to do all the work and not forget anything.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'It's remember' is incorrect; it should be 'It helps me remember'. Also, 'it's help me remind me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps remind me'. The phrase 'not forget anyone' is incorrect in this context; 'not forget anything' is appropriate. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× In my point of view other I don't know about others, but as I mentioned I love to making a list.

✓ In my point of view, I don't know about others, but as I mentioned, I love making a list.

The phrase 'other I don't know about others' is incorrect and confusing. It should be removed or rephrased. Also, 'love to making' is incorrect; it should be 'love making'. Proper commas are needed for clarity.

× I prefer a phone to making a list because every time when I want to go, my phone is always with me so I can easily just open it and check the list.

✓ I prefer using my phone to make a list because every time I want to go, my phone is always with me, so I can easily just open it and check the list.

The phrase 'prefer a phone to making a list' is incorrect. The correct form is 'prefer using my phone to make a list'. Also, 'every time when I want to go' is better as 'every time I want to go'. Commas improve sentence clarity.