List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'go to shopping' nên là 'go shopping'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone before I go out. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time because I can quickly check the list while shopping.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'Make a lead for your work' không rõ nghĩa. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết cụ thể, dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and manage my time effectively. As a result, I usually complete my work on time and improve my productivity.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'don't like to list' nên là 'don't like making lists'.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and prefer to manage tasks mentally. However, I believe making lists is an effective way to organize both personal and work life.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Hãy chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. It helps me keep track of my tasks clearly and even reminds me to complete them on time.

× before I go to shopping I usually have the habit to write all my necessary things in my note on my phone

✓ before I go shopping I usually have the habit of writing all my necessary things in my note on my phone

In English, after 'go' when referring to activities, the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. Also, 'have the habit to write' is incorrect; it should be 'have the habit of writing'. This is because 'habit' is followed by 'of' plus a gerund (verb + -ing).

× and it's helped me so much when I come to the shop

✓ and it has helped me so much when I come to the shop

The phrase 'it's helped' is a contraction of 'it is helped', which is incorrect here. The correct form is the present perfect 'it has helped' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present.

× I just open my note and buy and find the thing. At least in the north.

✓ I just open my note and buy and find the things, at least in the store.

The phrase 'At least in the north' is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly, the intended meaning is 'at least in the store' or 'at least in the shop'. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context of multiple items.

× because Make a lead for your work helped me organize the task I have and manage my time to complete every task.

✓ because making a list for your work helps me organize the tasks I have and manage my time to complete every task.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'Make a lead' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, the verb tense should be present simple 'helps' to match the habitual action. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'every task' context.

× Thanks to it, my task was done on time and I usually gain the positive productivity.

✓ Thanks to it, my tasks are done on time and I usually gain positive productivity.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'The positive productivity' is incorrect; 'productivity' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'gain positive productivity' is better than 'gain the positive productivity'.

× For me, I think that people don't like to list because of their personality.

✓ For me, I think that people don't like to make lists because of their personality.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct phrase is 'make lists'. This is a common collocation in English.

× They believe in this, in themselves, that they can manage everything and remember it in their brain.

✓ They believe in this, in themselves, that they can manage everything and remember it in their minds.

The phrase 'in their brain' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in their minds' when referring to memory or thought processes.

× Phone is the effect. The best effective wait till is because it's available every time when I bring it along with me.

✓ The phone is effective. The best way is because it's available every time I bring it along with me.

'Phone is the effect' is incorrect; it should be 'The phone is effective'. 'The best effective wait till' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'The best way'. Also, 'every time when' should be 'every time' or 'whenever'.

× It's helped me know everything in clear way and have the function to remind me to complete task.

✓ It has helped me know everything clearly and has the function to remind me to complete tasks.

'In clear way' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'clearly'. Also, 'have the function' should be 'has the function' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Complete task' should be plural 'complete tasks'.