List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should focus on grammar accuracy and clarity. For example, use 'helps' instead of 'help', 'list' instead of 'at least', and 'save' instead of 'sell'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me find items quickly. Also, making a list allows me to manage my budget better and avoid buying unnecessary things. This way, I can save both time and money.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I sometimes forget to update it regularly' instead of repeating 'forget to update it'. Also, clarify your last sentence for better understanding.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but it does not always work well because I sometimes forget to update it regularly. For example, when I have many tests, I find it hard to keep track of everything, so the list becomes less effective. However, it helps me organize my previous tasks.

提案: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and avoid confusing phrases. Use simple and direct sentences to explain your ideas. For example, say 'Some people think making a list takes too much time' and give clear reasons.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Also, when they have many things to do, they prefer to do tasks one by one instead of planning everything in a list.

提案: In English (Cambodia), improve clarity by using correct sentence forms and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be lost, but phone lists are safe and easy to keep.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be lost easily. Lists on my phone stay safe and I can access them anytime without losing information.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it help me find the item quickly.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me find the item quickly.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' for third person singular subjects.

× Also making at least allow me to manage my budget better and avoid buying unnecessary thing.

✓ Also, making at least allows me to manage my budget better and avoid buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'making at least' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items.

× Also making at least allow me to manage my budget better and avoid buying unnecessary thing.

✓ Also, making a list allows me to manage my budget better and avoid buying unnecessary things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple unnecessary items. Quantifiers and nouns must agree in number.

× This way I can sell both time and money for me.

✓ This way I can save both time and money for myself.

The verb 'sell' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'save'. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly express the benefit to the speaker.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but it does not always work very well because I sometimes forgot to update it, forget to update it regularly.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but it does not always work very well because I sometimes forget to update it regularly.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense and inconsistent with 'sometimes' which implies habitual action. It should be 'forget' in present tense to match the habitual context.

× For example, when it has many tests, I find it hard to keep track of everything, so the list become less effective.

✓ For example, when there are many tasks, I find it hard to keep track of everything, so the list becomes less effective.

The phrase 'it has many tests' is incorrect; 'there are many tasks' is appropriate. Also, 'list become' should be 'list becomes' to agree with singular subject 'list'.

× However, it helped me organize my previous.

✓ However, it helped me organize my previous tasks.

The sentence is incomplete; 'previous' should be followed by a noun such as 'tasks' to complete the meaning.

× Because some people sitting there making a list will take too much time for them to do thing or has many thing to do.

✓ Because some people think that making a list will take too much time for them to do things or they have many things to do.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× For example when some people when people make English they will has a lot of thing to do instead of the one by one, one by one for their plan to do.

✓ For example, when people learn English, they will have a lot of things to do instead of doing them one by one according to their plan.

The sentence has pronoun errors and unclear phrasing. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'people'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. The phrase is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I think it's making a list on the paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I think it's better than making a list on paper.

The phrase 'it's making a list on the paper' is incorrect. It should be 'it's better than making a list on paper' to express preference clearly.

× The paper will lose, but it's making a list on my phone.

✓ The paper can be lost, but when making a list on my phone,

The phrase 'The paper will lose' is incorrect; it should be 'The paper can be lost'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring.

× Those lists still stay still and cannot be lost the information.

✓ those lists will still be there and the information cannot be lost.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected for clarity and proper sentence structure.