List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 発音の誤り（"race"は"list"の誤りと思われます）や文法の誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。例えば、"I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously and enjoy shopping with my wife."のように言えます。

例: I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I like to buy things spontaneously and enjoy the experience with my wife.

提案: 回答は明確で内容も具体的ですが、より自然な表現や接続詞を使うとさらに良くなります。例えば、"Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize and prioritize tasks, so I can stay focused and not forget anything important."のように言い換えられます。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize and prioritize tasks, so I can stay focused and not forget anything important.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文法や語彙の誤りも多いため、簡潔で明確な理由を述べる練習が必要です。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or difficult to organize their tasks."のように言えます。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or difficult to organize their tasks.

提案: 発音や語彙の誤り（"rests"や"risks"は"lists"の誤りと思われます）や文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、理由も明確に述べましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check them anytime and anywhere."のように言えます。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check them anytime and anywhere.

× No, I don't make a race when I go to shopping because I'd like to see or buy what I want to buy at that time.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I'd like to see or buy what I want to buy at that time.

The word 'race' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. This is a misuse of quantifiers and verb forms.

× No, I don't make a race when I go to shopping because I'd like to see or buy what I want to buy at that time.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I'd like to see or buy what I want to buy at that time.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here.

× So I don't make a list and enjoy the winter shopping with my wife.

✓ So I don't make a list and enjoy winter shopping with my wife.

The article 'the' before 'winter shopping' is unnecessary because 'winter shopping' is a general activity, not a specific event.

× Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it help?

The question 'Does it work?' is ambiguous here; 'Does it help?' is more appropriate when referring to making lists for work.

× I think this is because making great wrists itself is difficult for someone.

✓ I think this is because making great lists itself is difficult for some people.

The word 'wrists' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'someone' is too vague; 'some people' is more appropriate.

× There are many tasks such as replying emails or completing his reports, so the.

✓ There are many tasks such as replying to emails or completing reports, so it can be difficult.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Replying emails' should be 'replying to emails'. 'His reports' is unclear; 'reports' is sufficient.

× I definitely prefer to make rests on my phone if I might.

✓ I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone if I might.

The word 'rests' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lists'. This is a misuse of quantifiers.

× If I make risks on my phone, I can look it back easily wherever you are.

✓ If I make lists on my phone, I can look them back easily wherever I am.

'Risks' should be 'lists'. Also, 'look it back' is incorrect; it should be 'look them back'. The pronoun 'you' should be 'I' to match the subject.

× I am also with using technologies we can be.

✓ I am also comfortable using technology.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.