List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, you can combine your ideas into fewer sentences to avoid redundancy and improve fluency.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because my mind gets distracted easily, so having a list helps me stay focused and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence, such as 'therefore' or 'which means that'.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Therefore, I can focus better and manage my tasks efficiently, which means I prioritize important tasks and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Be careful with grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and pronouns. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Try to be more specific and concise.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. For example, my husband prefers to decide his priorities spontaneously and finds lists confusing.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because having them in front of me helps me pay more attention. Therefore, I always write my plans down to stay organized.

× In my opinion, some people thinks making leads take away their freedom of action.

✓ In my opinion, some people think making lists takes away their freedom of action.

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'think' not 'thinks' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'making leads' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' to match the context. Additionally, 'take' should be 'takes' because the subject 'making lists' is singular (gerund phrase).

× For example, my husband is a person who likes to do the things that he think is a priority in his mind and he hates having this because he think it can make him confused.

✓ For example, my husband is a person who likes to do the things that he thinks are a priority in his mind and he hates having this because he thinks it can make him confused.

The verb 'think' should be 'thinks' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'is a priority' should be 'are a priority' because 'things' is plural. The verb 'think' in the second clause also needs to be 'thinks' for subject-verb agreement.