List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding a linking word and a bit more detail to make it more natural and effective. Try to avoid starting with 'Definitely' as it sounds a bit informal for IELTS. Also, explain briefly why making a list helps you.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need, and as a result, I avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct the phrase 'it is easy to me' to 'it is easy for me'. Also, explain briefly how making a list helps you at work.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it is easy for me to evaluate the tasks, and this way, I can manage my time more efficiently.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by adding a linking word and more specific details. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. Try to explain why making lists might take time for some people.

例: Some people do not like making lists because they think it is time-consuming, and they prefer to rely on memory instead.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Instead of 'It is convenient to me' and 'according to me', use 'because it is convenient' and 'also'.

例: I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient, and I can easily edit and rearrange the items whenever I want.

× Of course, yes, I make a list for my work because it is easy to me to evaluate the task.

✓ Of course, yes, I make a list for my work because it is easy for me to evaluate the task.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'easy'. The correct preposition is 'for' when expressing that something is easy for someone. So, 'easy to me' should be 'easy for me'. This is a common prepositional error and correcting it improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.