List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating ideas. For example, say 'I don't make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.'

例: I don't usually make a shopping list because I can remember the items I need, which helps me avoid buying things I don't require.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make lists for work, and they help me manage my time effectively. I complete all the tasks on my list.'

例: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me organise my time efficiently, and I manage to complete all the tasks on the list.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to keep their free time flexible and not be restricted by schedules.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to have free time without strict plans or rules.

提案: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to explain your reasons more clearly. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient, I can access it anytime, and it saves money on paper and pens.'

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient, easy to access, and I don't have to spend money on paper and pens.

× I don't make a list when I go shopping because I can remember anything that I want to buy and I don't buy anything don't need.

✓ I don't make a list when I go shopping because I can remember everything that I want to buy and I don't buy anything I don't need.

The phrase 'anything that I want to buy' should be 'everything that I want to buy' to correctly express the intended meaning. Also, 'I don't buy anything don't need' is missing the subject 'I' before 'don't need'. This is a present tense issue where the sentence structure is incorrect and needs proper subject inclusion and quantifier usage.

× Does it work? Oh, I usually make those for the work and it's work because my list is very science for the time and all my list is done 100% and it's was very good.

✓ Does it work? Oh, I usually make those for work and it works because my list is very precise for the time and all my list is done 100%, and it was very good.

The modal verb 'does' is correctly used in the question, but the response has errors in verb forms and word choice. 'It's work' should be 'it works' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'Science' is incorrect here; 'precise' fits the intended meaning. 'It's was very good' mixes tenses; 'it was very good' is correct. This involves modal verb usage and present tense issues.

× Some people don't like making this because they things like don't want to do your days free time to do the rules because they like.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they don't want to spend their free time following rules, as they prefer freedom.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear references. 'They things like don't want' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't want'. 'Your days free time' should be 'their free time'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns issue.

× I prefer to make the list on my phone because if I use on the phone I can contact many way and I don't need money to buy paper and pen.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because if I use my phone I can contact many ways and I don't need money to buy paper and pen.

The phrase 'if I use on the phone' is incorrect; it should be 'if I use my phone'. Also, 'contact many way' should be 'contact many ways'. These are errors in preposition use and noun plurality. Correct preposition and plural noun forms improve sentence clarity.