List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“when I shopping”和“promise unnecessary purchases”不准确。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免表达不清。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and money.

提案: 回答中存在不完整和不连贯的句子，如“forces”和“listing taxis in order of property”表达不清。建议完整表达观点，使用恰当词汇，并确保句子连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

提案: 回答中有明显的词汇错误和句子不完整，如“making ladies”和“find it”缺少宾语，导致意思不明。建议使用准确词汇，完整表达原因。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to their tasks. They may also feel that lists create unnecessary pressure.

提案: 回答中“more confident”用词不当，应为“convenient”。此外，注意主谓一致，如“using my phone help”应为“helps”。建议注意词汇准确性和语法正确性。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing paper. Also, using my phone helps me stay organized since I always have it with me.

× For example, when I shopping for groceries, having a list gives me time and promise unnecessary purchases.

✓ For example, when I am shopping for groceries, having a list gives me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.

这里缺少动词be的形式，shopping前应加am构成现在进行时。shopping是动词的现在分词形式，需与be动词连用表示正在进行的动作。

× For example, when I shopping for groceries, having a list gives me time and promise unnecessary purchases.

✓ For example, when I am shopping for groceries, having a list gives me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.

promise用法错误，应为prevent，表示“防止”，且动词需用第三人称单数形式prevents。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and forces.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and keeps me focused.

句子不完整，forces后缺少宾语，导致句意不明。应补充完整表达。

× For example, by listing taxis in order of property, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important.

✓ For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important things.

taxis应为tasks，property应为priority，important后缺少名词，需补充things。单词拼写错误和词性使用错误。

× Some people dislike making ladies because they find it and prefer a more spontaneous approach to their tasks.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and prefer a more spontaneous approach to their tasks.

ladies应为lists，且句中缺少形容词boring来说明原因。拼写错误和句意不完整。

× Some may feel that unnecessary pressure or make.

✓ Some may feel that it creates unnecessary pressure or stress.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。需补充完整句子。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more confident and accessible.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

confident用法错误，形容物品应使用convenient，表示“方便的”。

× Also, using my phone help me stay organized since I always have it with me.

✓ Also, using my phone helps me stay organized since I always have it with me.

主语using my phone为第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加s变为helps，保持主谓一致。