List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'without at least' nên là 'without a list', và 'discover nervous' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng từ sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy the freedom to choose whatever catches my eye. Shopping without a list feels more relaxing and spontaneous, and it helps me discover new products I might not have thought of before.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'When I walk in' không rõ nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói 'When I start work'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'make at least' thay vì 'make a list'.

例: Yes, I do. When I start work, there are many tasks I need to complete, and making a list helps me remember to accomplish them all.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ như 'uh' và 'personally, I don't know' vì nó làm câu trả lời kém tự nhiên. Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như 'spontaneous' cần được dùng đúng cách.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not used to this habit and prefer to be more spontaneous, doing whatever they want without planning.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prefer make' nên là 'prefer to make', và câu 'I write down a list I it on the paper' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more convenient for me. When I write a list on paper, it feels more real and helps me remember better.

× For me, I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy the freedom to choose whatever catch my eye at the moment.

✓ For me, I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy the freedom to choose whatever catches my eye at the moment.

The verb 'catch' should be in the third person singular form 'catches' to agree with the singular subject 'whatever'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb + -ing form usage.

× Shopping without at least feels more relaxing and spontaneous and help me discover nervous I might not have thought of before.

✓ Shopping without a list feels more relaxing and spontaneous and helps me discover new things I might not have thought of before.

The original sentence is missing the word 'a list' after 'without', causing confusion. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Shopping'. The word 'nervous' is incorrect in this context and should be replaced with 'new things' or similar. This is a sentence structure and subject-verb agreement error.

× Yes I do. When I walk in there are many tasks that I have to be done and make at least help me to remember to accomplish them.

✓ Yes, I do. When I walk in, there are many tasks that have to be done and making a list helps me to remember to accomplish them.

The phrase 'I have to be done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to be done' without 'I'. Also, 'make at least' is incorrect and should be 'making a list'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'making a list'. This involves past tense and subject-verb agreement errors.

× Uh, personally, I don't know, but I think, uh, they don't have this habit in their life and they want more spontaneous to do whatever they want.

✓ Uh, personally, I don't know, but I think they don't have this habit in their life and they want to be more spontaneous to do whatever they want.

The word 'more spontaneous' is an adjective and needs to be preceded by 'to be' to function correctly in this sentence. The phrase 'want more spontaneous' is incorrect; it should be 'want to be more spontaneous'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× For me, I prefer make a list on paper because it's more convenient for me and when I write down a list I it on the paper I feel it's more realistic.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more convenient for me, and when I write down a list on paper, I feel it's more realistic.

The phrase 'I prefer make' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to make'. Also, 'I it on the paper' is incorrect and should be removed or corrected to 'on paper'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb form.