List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。例如，“I don't make list”应为“I don't make a list”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免冗长。

例: I usually don't make a list for daily shopping because I can remember what I need. However, on weekends, my family and I shop for the whole week, so I prefer to make a list to ensure I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇（"take a take a"），应避免。句子结构可以更自然，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I make lists for important tasks at work. For instance, before a mathematics exam, I list the steps I need to take next, which helps me stay focused and organized.

提案: 回答中“making this”表达不准确，应使用“making lists”。句子结构可以更自然，避免重复和冗余。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally. Others are confident in their memory and feel that making lists is unnecessary.

提案: 回答中时态不一致，且句子未完整结束。应注意时态一致性和句子完整性，避免语法错误。

例: I used to prefer making lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because there are many useful apps that help me keep my notes organized digitally.

× I don't make list and I can remember all the items that I should buy.

✓ I don't make lists and I can remember all the items that I should buy.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表示的是购物时可能制作的多个清单。单数形式不符合语境。

× my whole family sometimes choose to buy groceries for the upcoming week.

✓ my whole family sometimes chooses to buy groceries for the upcoming week.

“family”作为一个整体名词，视为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“chooses”。

× I will choose to make some notes to remember all things I need to buy.

✓ I will choose to make some notes to remember all the things I need to buy.

“all things”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指需要购买的所有东西。

× In some important situations I make a list for my work.

✓ In some important situations I make lists for my work.

“some important situations”表示多种情况，后面的“a list”应改为复数“lists”，与前文复数保持一致。

× I will choose to make a list for what I should do in the next stage and I think it really keeps me focused and organized.

✓ I will choose to make a list of what I should do in the next stage and I think it really keeps me focused and organized.

“make a list for what”表达不准确，应改为“make a list of what”，表示列出接下来要做的事项。

× I think some people don't like making this just because they prefer to remember things mentally.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists just because they prefer to remember things mentally.

“making this”表达不清，应改为“making lists”，指代制作清单。

× For others, they may be confident about their memories and they think they don't need to make this necessarily.

✓ For others, they may be confident about their memories and they think they don't need to make lists necessarily.

同上，“make this”应改为“make lists”，指代制作清单。

× In the past I prefer to make a list on the paper, however now I prefer to choosing my phone to take some notes because there are a lot of powerful apps and they can help me to keep things digitally and.

✓ In the past I preferred to make a list on paper, however now I prefer to choose my phone to take some notes because there are a lot of powerful apps and they can help me keep things digitally.

“In the past”表示过去，谓语动词应使用过去式“preferred”。“prefer to choosing”结构错误，应为“prefer to choose”。“on the paper”中“the”多余，应为“on paper”。句尾“help me to keep things digitally and”不完整，去掉“and”更通顺。