List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态和主谓一致。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并且使回答更简洁自然。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment. However, my mother always makes a list to stay organized.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议使用正确时态，丰富细节，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many subjects to study daily, such as maths, further maths, and economics. Making a list helps me organize my tasks effectively, so it definitely works for me.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，逻辑不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they feel confident managing their tasks without one, or they believe lists don't help them stay organized.

提案: 回答中有表达不完整和重复的问题。建议完整表达偏好，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient; I can easily edit them and access them anytime and anywhere. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or damaged.

× I never made a list when I'm shopping, but my mother do.

✓ I never make a list when I'm shopping, but my mother does.

这里主语是第三人称单数（my mother），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“does”，而不是“do”。

× I think it's not necessary for me to choose what I should to buy.

✓ I think it's not necessary for me to choose what I should buy.

情态动词should后面直接接动词原形，不能加to。

× I will just buy what I see and what I need at that time.

✓ I just buy what I see and what I need at that time.

根据上下文，这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时而非将来时。

× I made a list for my work because I have to do a lot of things daily, like I need to learn maths, further maths and economy or ions and a lot of things.

✓ I make a list for my work because I have to do a lot of things daily, like I need to learn maths, further maths and economics or ions and a lot of things.

这里描述的是日常习惯，应使用一般现在时“make”而非过去时“made”。另外，“economy”应改为“economics”，表示学科名称。

× I think somebody may know how to how should they do in certain times so they don't need to make a list because it didn't work for them.

✓ I think somebody may know how they should do at certain times so they don't need to make a list because it doesn't work for them.

“how should they do”语序错误，正确语序是“how they should do”。“certain times”前应加介词“at”。“didn't work”时态与前文不符，应改为一般现在时“doesn't work”。

× I prefer to make a list on because I think it's convenient because I can change my list easily and I can see my list every time, everywhere, every space.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient since I can change my list easily and I can see my list anytime, anywhere.

“make a list on”后面缺少具体介词短语，应补充“my phone”。“every time, everywhere, every space”表达不自然，改为“anytime, anywhere”更合适。

× But if I make this on paper, I have to guard it everywhere.

✓ But if I make this on paper, I have to keep it with me everywhere.

“guard it everywhere”表达不自然，应该用“keep it with me”表示随身携带。