List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 좀 더 구체적인 예시나 개인적인 경험을 추가하면 더 효과적일 것입니다. 예를 들어, 어떤 물건을 리스트에 넣는지 구체적으로 설명해 보세요.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important, such as groceries like milk and bread. This helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, especially when there are many tempting items in the store.

提案: 'make tutorials'는 질문에 맞지 않는 표현입니다. 질문은 '리스트를 만드는지'에 관한 것이므로, 리스트 작성에 대해 직접적으로 답변하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하세요.

例: Yes, I often make to-do lists for my work. It helps me stay organized and manage my time better. For example, I list tasks like replying to emails and preparing reports, which increases my productivity and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I check them off.

提案: 'a risk restricts them'는 의미가 불분명합니다. 좀 더 명확한 표현을 사용하고, 연결어를 활용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

例: Some people might find making lists time-consuming because they trust their memory. Moreover, others prefer spontaneity and flexibility, feeling that a list restricts their freedom to act spontaneously.

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 구체적이며 연결도 잘 되어 있습니다. 다만, 'crossing items of the list' 대신 'crossing items off the list'가 더 자연스러운 표현입니다.

例: I prefer using my phone because it's easy to update and I always have it with me. However, sometimes I use paper when I want to focus better. I find it easier to remember tasks when I write them by hand, and there's something satisfying about physically crossing items off the list.

× Some people might perceive it as time consuming.

✓ Some people might perceive it as time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective before a noun or in a predicate position to describe something. This clarifies that it is a single descriptive term.

× I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I check of completed tasks.

✓ I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I check off completed tasks.

The phrase 'check of' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'check off,' meaning to mark items as completed. Using the correct verb + particle combination is essential for clarity.

× Others prefer spontaneity and flexibility, feeling that a risk restricts them.

✓ Others prefer spontaneity and flexibility, feeling that a risk restricts them.

The sentence is grammatically correct but semantically unclear. Possibly, 'a risk' should be 'a list' or 'rules' to make sense. However, since it does not violate the listed grammar problem types, no correction is made.

× there's something satisfying about physically crossing items of the list.

✓ there's something satisfying about physically crossing items off the list.

The correct preposition in the phrase is 'off' as in 'crossing items off the list,' which means marking them as completed. Using 'of' is incorrect in this context.