List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list when I go to the market to buy ingredients for my mom's cooking because I often forget small details." This makes your answer more effective and easier to understand.

例: I usually make a shopping list when I go to the market to buy ingredients for my mom's cooking because I often forget small details. Writing the list helps me remember everything I need.

提案: Try to use clearer and more natural sentences in English (Cambodia). Avoid filler words like "uh" and improve grammar. For example, say "Yes, I make lists for my work as a student. It helps me manage tasks well, even difficult ones. I can also review my schedule beforehand to prepare." This will make your answer more fluent and effective.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work as a student. It helps me manage tasks well, even difficult ones. I can also review my schedule beforehand to prepare.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to express your ideas more clearly and use simpler, correct phrases. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or they find writing lists difficult or unnecessary." This makes your answer clearer and easier to follow.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or they find writing lists difficult or unnecessary.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. For example, say "I prefer making lists on my phone because typing is easier than writing by hand. As technology develops, we should use it smartly to make tasks easier." This improves clarity and flow.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because typing is easier than writing by hand. As technology develops, we should use it smartly to make tasks easier.

× As I remember for most of the time that I go to market to buy something for my mom, I like to I like to make the list because I'm struggling at remember a small thing on a small detail, which is the ingredient in cuisine.

✓ As I remember, most of the time when I go to the market to buy something for my mom, I like to make a list because I struggle to remember small details, such as ingredients in cuisine.

The sentence uses 'I'm struggling at remember' which is incorrect; the correct form is 'I struggle to remember'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' to indicate any list, and 'go to market' should be 'go to the market' for correct article usage. The verb tense should be present simple to describe habitual actions.

× I'm struggling at remember a small thing on a small detail, which is the ingredient in cuisine.

✓ I struggle to remember small details, such as ingredients in cuisine.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'struggling'; the correct form is 'struggle to remember'. Also, 'on a small detail' is incorrect; 'small details' is more natural and correct.

× I like to I like to make the list because I'm struggling at remember a small thing on a small detail, which is the ingredient in cuisine.

✓ I like to make a list because I struggle to remember small details, such as ingredients in cuisine.

The article 'the' before 'list' is incorrect here; it should be 'a list' because it refers to any list, not a specific one. Also, 'the ingredient' should be 'ingredients' to match plural form.

× Umm, yes, I did make a list for my work, uh, and for nowaday I am a student, so it's work, uh, really well for me because I can handle everything well, even the hard situation.

✓ Umm, yes, I did make a list for my work, and nowadays I am a student, so it works really well for me because I can handle everything well, even difficult situations.

'Nowaday' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'nowadays'. 'It's work' should be 'it works' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The hard situation' should be plural 'difficult situations' for natural expression.

× And before the schedule, I can, uh, retake it or review something that I have to be prepared on.

✓ And before the scheduled time, I can review or go over something that I have to be prepared for.

'Retake it' is not appropriate here; 'review' or 'go over' is better. Also, 'prepared on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'prepared for'. 'Before the schedule' is vague; 'before the scheduled time' is clearer.

× In my opinion, some people might have a good call thinking or a goal remembering brains, and I think it might be a little hard for some people to write because it's because they don't really like it or they might remember it well.

✓ In my opinion, some people might have good memory or strong thinking skills, and I think it might be a little hard for some people to write lists because they don't really like it or they might remember things well.

'Good call thinking or a goal remembering brains' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'good memory or strong thinking skills'. 'It' is ambiguous; specifying 'write lists' clarifies meaning. 'Remember it well' should be 'remember things well' for clarity.

× In my opinion, some people might have a good call thinking or a goal remembering brains, and I think it might be a little hard for some people to write because it's because they don't really like it or they might remember it well.

✓ In my opinion, some people might have good memory or strong thinking skills, and I think it might be a little hard for some people to write lists because they don't really like it or they might remember things well.

The phrase 'a good call thinking or a goal remembering brains' is incorrect and unclear; it should be replaced with 'good memory or strong thinking skills' to convey the intended meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on the phone because it, it's really easy for me to write on a keyboard rather than writing a note.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's really easy for me to type on a keyboard rather than write notes.

'On the phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'Write on a keyboard' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'type'. 'Writing a note' should be plural 'write notes' for general meaning.

× And I think if as the technology is developing, I think we should use something in a good way, not a hard way and a smart way, I mean.

✓ And I think as technology develops, we should use it in a good and smart way, not a difficult way.

The sentence is awkward and redundant. 'If as the technology is developing' is incorrect; it should be 'as technology develops'. 'Use something in a good way, not a hard way and a smart way' is confusing; it should be 'use it in a good and smart way, not a difficult way' for clarity and correctness.