List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Definitely yes. Uh, because I am a person who likes to make a list before I go to a shop. I umm, I used to make a mistake before, so I hope I can plan my list well before I go to the shop.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I do a list for my work. Actually I am a a fresh graduate student so I make a list umm everyday. And my list is uh the same in the everyday and it is work in everyday because I don't to waste my time in the gap year.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like to make their list because they feel like it is a trouble for them. Like they need to write down them and write down everyday what to do what, what to do to for this or what to do for those. And it is, umm, very, uh, uncomfortable for them it.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Nowadays technology grown rapidly and everyone have their own handphone, including me. So I prefer to make a list on my handphone because I have my handphone in with, with, with my pocket. So I can uh check every time, everywhere when I need to uh, check my list.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有较多的语气词（如 uh, umm），影响流畅性。建议减少语气词的使用，使表达更自然。同时，回答可以更具体，说明列清单的具体好处或经历。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting important items and saves time. For example, last week I bought everything I needed without any extra trips to the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议加强语法练习，避免重复和语气词，且回答应更具体说明清单如何帮助工作。
例: Yes, I make a daily to-do list for my work as a fresh graduate. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't waste time during my gap year.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome to write down tasks every day. Moreover, they may feel it restricts their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词，影响表达清晰度。建议简化句子结构，减少重复，使用更准确的词汇。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list anytime and anywhere.
文法
× Yes, I do a list for my work.
✓ Yes, I do a list for my work.
此句中 'do a list' 用法不正确，应该使用 'make a list'，但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法问题类型，'do a list' 不属于列出的类型，因此不做修改。
× Actually I am a a fresh graduate student so I make a list umm everyday.
✓ Actually I am a fresh graduate student so I make a list every day.
'everyday' 是形容词，表示日常的，正确表达频率应为 'every day'，表示每天。此处属于词语用法错误，不属于列出的语法问题类型，因此不做修改。
× And my list is uh the same in the everyday and it is work in everyday because I don't to waste my time in the gap year.
✓ And my list is the same every day and it works every day because I don't want to waste my time in the gap year.
此句中 'it is work' 主谓不一致，应为 'it works'，属于主谓一致错误（27号问题），'in the everyday' 应为 'every day'，但不属于列出的语法问题类型。
× Like they need to write down them and write down everyday what to do what, what to do to for this or what to do for those.
✓ Like they need to write them down and write down every day what to do for this or what to do for those.
'write down them' 中 'them' 位置错误，正确应为 'write them down'，属于代词用法错误（12号问题）。
× Nowadays technology grown rapidly and everyone have their own handphone, including me.
✓ Nowadays technology grows rapidly and everyone has their own handphone, including me.
'technology grown' 缺少动词时态，正确为 'technology grows'，属于时态错误（6号问题）；'everyone have' 主谓不一致，应为 'everyone has'，属于主谓一致错误（27号问题）。
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