List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I always make a list. I make a list when I go shopping or when I go to the supermarket to buy many things. Also, I make a list when I study because I have many things to study.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Actually I do not work because I am a student, but I sometimes make a list when I do my homework or my assignments in my university. There are many assignments in the final.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I don't know well, but I think many people feel making lists a little tedious. And it took a time.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer making lists on my phone because I usually ring my phone to everywhere so I will never forgot it in my house and also in my phone there are many.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答は基本的に質問に答えていますが、内容が少し冗長で、繰り返しが見られます。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、具体的な理由や例を加え、文章を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。
例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, especially for groceries, because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 質問の意図に対して直接的な回答が不足しています。また、文法的な誤りや不自然な表現もあります。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果について具体的に説明しましょう。
例: I don't have a job since I'm a student, but I make lists for my university assignments, which helps me organize my tasks and meet deadlines effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 答えが曖昧で、文法的な誤りもあります。自信を持って意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明し、文法や表現を正しく使う練習をしましょう。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming, which makes them avoid this task.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。理由を明確にし、正しい文法で簡潔に表現することを心がけましょう。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget my list at home.
文法
× And it took a time.
✓ And it takes time.
The sentence is talking about a general fact or habit, so the present tense 'takes' should be used instead of the past tense 'took'. Also, 'a time' is incorrect; 'time' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article.
× I usually ring my phone to everywhere so I will never forgot it in my house and also in my phone there are many.
✓ I usually bring my phone everywhere so I will never forget it in my house, and also there are many on my phone.
The verb 'ring' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'bring' when carrying something. The preposition 'to' before 'everywhere' is unnecessary. 'Forgot' is the past tense; the correct form here is 'forget' to match the future tense 'will'. The phrase 'in my phone there are many' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what 'many' refers to, but since context is limited, it is corrected to 'there are many on my phone'.
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