List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 불완전합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 추가하여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

例: Yes, I usually make a detailed shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me buy everything I need without forgetting anything. This way, I can save time and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: 질문에 맞지 않는 답변을 했고, 내용이 중복되며 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 구체적인 예시와 이유를 명확히 제시하세요.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me prioritize tasks and ensures I don't forget important deadlines, which improves my productivity.

提案: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 강화하고, 좀 더 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time and can be quite tedious. Consequently, they might forget important tasks or make more mistakes, especially when they are busy.

提案: 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 불완전합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 구체적인 이유와 장점을 명확히 설명하세요.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I don't need pen and paper, and I always have my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere easily.

× This way I can save time and.

✓ This way I can save time.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, resulting in an incomplete sentence. To correct this, remove the conjunction 'and' or complete the sentence with the intended continuation.

× For example, by having an organized list, I can save time and avoid wandering around the aisles originally.

✓ For example, by having an organized list, I can save time and avoid wandering around the aisles unnecessarily.

The word 'originally' is incorrectly used here; it does not fit the intended meaning. The correct adverb is 'unnecessarily' to express avoiding wandering without reason. This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× It helps me stick to my budget and prevent me from making purchases.

✓ It helps me stick to my budget and prevents me from making unnecessary purchases.

The verbs 'helps' and 'prevent' are not parallel; 'helps' is third person singular, so 'prevent' should be 'prevents' to agree in number. Also, adding 'unnecessary' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can write it down without needing pen and pen paper and I always have my phone with me so I can check it in time and anywhere and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can write it down without needing pen and paper, and I always have my phone with me so I can check it anytime and anywhere.

The sentence is run-on and ends abruptly with 'and'. Also, 'pen and pen paper' is redundant; 'pen and paper' is correct. 'In time and anywhere' should be 'anytime and anywhere' for natural expression. The sentence is corrected by proper punctuation and word choice.